Reviews for END: The Once and Future Devil King
Louis XII chapter 1 . 6/13
if you take it like this, all the male protagonists are better than Issei.

Natsu better than Issei? I will say yes ... and no!

Yes Natsu is "better" than Issei since he isn't obsessed with oppais and boobs.

and no, Natsu is "not better" than Issei! Natsu is dumb as Issei, winning all his battles thanks to the power of friendship/plot armor.

In one way, Natsu was even worse than Issei!

in the first chapter/episode, what happened to everyone who was below the tsunami caused by Natsu?
were they safe? are there any injured? deaths?
and what about the destruction caused? sunken boats (with their goods)? ravaged houses? ruined lives?

oh wait! it didn't matter since it's "Fairy Tail"!

the worst was Makaroff who only encouraged this kind of destructive behavior!
while mocking and scorning the council, THE legitimate government of Fiore?

I like Natsu and Fairy Tail but let's be realistic, neither Natsu nor Fairy tail was "better".

Natsu x harem? sadly, this story doesn't seem to differ from millions of others. Issei is ejected and replaced for his harem.

and I don't really see the point of adding the Rosario girls when the feminim cast already includes more than 50 potential haremettes?
MuddyDwarf chapter 1 . 5/23
This needs to be updated
Scythe of Doom chapter 1 . 5/22
Love it. Its certainly one of the most unique crossovers and would love to see more it is also very original. I do have a suggestion if your willing to here me out, at some point you should awaken END as part of his heritage. Actually i think itd be cool if he awakened it during his fight with Riser. Have is parents recognize it too! And he could have gained it during his training with igneel but he was too young so he couldnt awakened the powers of curses.
Zack Lynch chapter 1 . 5/22
Love it, can't wait for more chapters. I hope he grows stronger faster, I don't like the idea of a weaker Natsu. I like how he interacted with everyone, it was funny.
A Simple Library chapter 1 . 4/10
ccccccooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee back! I wanna be the Pirate Ki-Oops! Wrong story! Anyway, good chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Great chapter got hooked like a 4th into this fic really hope that this series continues.
Ps : you have to add some of natsu’s friends into his peerage like gray and gajeel dont want him following risers footsteps
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 1 . 3/12
great introduction chapter.
AlphaDragon9700 chapter 1 . 3/4
I've been waiting for a new Fairy Tail x Highschool DXD crossover for the longest time!
mastercheif1229 chapter 1 . 3/3
Great first chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
Natsu becoming the next Hokage, I mean Devil King
Morregen chapter 1 . 2/29
Very nice first chapter!

I look forward to chapter 2! :3
FanFictionHunter chapter 1 . 2/23
So, is Natsu going to be referred to as Etherious all the time in this? Makes me wonder if we’ll be seeing Seilah or any of the other Etherious demon in this. Though, does Zeref exist in this world too?

Speaking of the Dragneel family, you actually included his parents into this! Seriously, I think this is the first story I’ve come across that actually uses those two since they were shown in that flashback panel.

I caught the RV reference at the end with the mention of vampires, ice women, succubi (who are bond to be fun when you get to the smut), and plant monsters. So, does Yokai Academy exist in this, or will all those girls be in the Kuoh uniform that frames the bust?

I gotta wonder if Natsu has any peerage members and who they might be and if any other FT characters will be converted into the DXD world.

And now for the obligatory harem wish list (I’ll try to keep it short):
-Erza
-Mira (should be easy to convert her to this since her Satan Soul would normally be thrown off with the DxD devils)
-Juvia
-Cana
-Bisca
-Ultear
-Seilah
-Angel (should be interesting)
-Kuroka
-Lady Phenex (while I can’t say for certain if Venelana and Grayfia can come in later on, that little interaction you had there definitely has my hopes up)
-Kalawarner
-Rossweisse
-Inner Moka/Outer Moka(Akasha)
-Kahlua
-Gyokuro(conquered enemy score)
-Kurumu
-Ageha
-Ruby(she and Akeno would get along great)
-Tsurara
-Ling Ling(maybe have her reincarnated instead of a zombie with a becoming quite the devil pun?)
-Ririko

Anyway, looking forward to more.
Crimson Dragon Armageddon chapter 1 . 2/22
So no updates? Not cool it was getting fun!
te.nellis chapter 1 . 2/22
Lol. Keep it up!
rufus264 chapter 1 . 2/21
Great start to this
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