I...wow. I wasn’t expecting to get this engrossed in this story but I totally love it! I love how it’s realistic yet it throws a wench and keeps the story line sorta intact.
I love forward to part 2.

Im annoyed by the fact that Maya hasnt tried to talk to Tami about the most important parts of the plot, but Im not surprised.

I am assuming when Sasuke reaches Orochimaru in the sequel and finds out Oliver is her uncle, he'll help him escape.

Muchas gracias por escribir está historia y llegar hasta este punto. Lo mantuviste constante, interesante y lograste formar una historia con sentido y bien construido en su totalidad. Voy a estar atenta por la próxima parte! Gracias por todo tu esfuerzo y trabajo!

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awwww

IT'S HAPPENING IT'S HAPPENINGGGGGG

thank you for the fanservice author

for a WEEK kakashi kakashi- you've got it pretty bad

yaaas teach him

lol

I feel sad for Tami, she probably felt like she failed Sasuke and the others for not being able to bring him back, but we have a Looooooong story to go haha, i wonder how Tami will improve over the next 2.5 years, how much stronger and wittier she'll get and how her relationship with Kakashi goes. Haha the part kakashi asking Maya if he ever ends up with someone else is funny, but I guess it helps to know he found an alternative option with Tami, and even before he found out his story.
I was kinda hoping the lightning scar would give her some upperhand, but I am hoping that now that the scar is gone and isn't blocking her chakra path, do you think she'll have a stronger ninjutsu or so? That she will have better control?
One question though, are you creating another story post? Or continuing on this one?

oh wow, she is going to lose the scar, here i thought she might keep it and it just powers her up. But since she is losing it i hope she can be more of the plotter as you said. Mind games, more or less, such as tricking others with words more than illusions etc. Just more well plotting and manipulating with fighting.

So this is the end... At least for now! I like it! Well done as always! I think Sasuke wasn't meant to stay. Even if Tami has all the power to convince him I don't think she could make the difference in here. It wouldn't be natural. It would even be forced and if like Tami is all-powerful and nobody likes that kind of characters. There's a lot of things coming for the future, and I'm ready to wait for them. And Kakashi: curiosity killed the cat, so stop asking the poor girl things your are not mean to know!
Hope to read you soon and keep in touch!

If you would post one more chapter when you start the next part as a sort of notification that would be awesome.