Buena historia espero una rápida continuación

great story

started reading this for shits and giggles like i always do when im bored. but now its way past that. im sorry how old is she? this is honestly disgusting and u should be ashamed of yourself sexualizing a minor. like this isn't criticism of your writing, this is u need to rethink your ethics and morals. i saw a comment like please make her a lolita. u are catering to pedophiles and making it seem as if minors engaging in such acts is no big deal. honestly i should have dipped when u began to describe an 11 year olds physique. its stomach churning. and before anyone says anything youre damn right i wont read this or interact anymore with any of your writings.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Maybe she could had changed the inside of the Room of Requeriments for a pool, it could help with cleaning

Sorry. I like the story itself, but I don’t think Ron is the dumbest person (we have Crabbe and Goyle for that, but they too excelled in dark arts). He has the strategic mind to beat Mcgonagall in Chess and if he was out of his brothers' shadows, he would have been a brighter student. (He is already good, he takes more Owls than twins combined, who were worshipped by everybody). Yes, he remembered harry's parseltongue open for five years, and it shows how good memory he possess if he wants to. No Adult was rooting for him, no encouragement for him, and no wonder he became lazy. When the fifth year he became a prefect everybody wondered how he is a prefect. Percy gets a new owl while Ron get an old unusable wand and they all pardon Neville for using a used wand. What! Ron could have been using the old wand if it wasn’t snapped. And clearly, he wasn’t a praise singer for light side, he's just a boy who thinks about right and wrong like everyone does. Ron is the ultimate underdog who gets mistreated by most of fiction writers, and the movies. Movies made him a comic relief.

Great chapter! I feel for Helen I bet that wasn't much fun. I wonder if she will Padma or any of her other close friends go through the ritual she has in first year and any other Helen plans to perform in the future? I was surprised that she didn't see Lockhart as the blowhard fraud he is and that she wanted to "sample his goods." She's not going to is she? Will Lockhart make some move on Helen? The wet dream scene of Hermione's was great, will we be seeing more lemons in the next chapter or anytime soon in this fanfic? Looking forward to reading more of this fanfic, hope you update the next chapter quicker than this one was. Update real soon I'm eager to read more!

great chapter cant wait for more!

nice chapter thx for writing it
will be fun to see how ya will write lockhart

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

this has been a great read so far! cant wait for more!

Come on. Why hatred for Ron? I liked this story so far, and I would continue to read this, but I disliked wherever Ron was bashed. Ron had a good mindset for chess, he beat Mcgonagall who was an elder witch and probably a smarter witch. He's the one who spend in shadows, underestimated by everyone, least loved
of the Weasley family. He was fed up with his brothers shining over him and his family adoring them over him, (Molly and Arthur can buy a owl for Percy for being a prefect, but not a wand for Ron. He is never treated specially, but Ginny got dress robes when Ron got old rags) he stopped trying. I'm sure he could have been good as Percy or Bill (Charlie, Twins and Ginny are more of their mother's) in education. Films did a great damage for Ron, stealing his lines and giving them to Hermione.

In a nutshell, I love this story, but not the making of Ron Weasley.

Amazing chapter, yet again!

nice chapter thx for writing it

"parcelmagic" and "parceltongue"... You made my day with that. The power to manipulate parcels! Beware! Reminds me of Box Ghost from Danny Phantom. I assume it's a simple spelling mistake from the original "parseltongue". If not... Well, that's actually funnier! Give me a sec while I'm laughing my arse off.

Amyway. Wonderful chapter and I'm very happy to see ypu going strong with this story. Hope to see more of your work soon!