Reviews for The Return of barrylawn
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
ok so this review is being posted on one of dakoolguys stories but its to clarify who im talking at for every post afterwards because i cant immediately make a second review on the same story so i have to review on different stories because i cant into fanfic account

when i use the word you im referring to you so if you see the word you it refers to you you understand

glad to clear things up
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
"My underling just PM'd me and said that they're putting the finishing touches on the story."

Ah, the one that was going to posted "any minute now" 36 min ago? Maybe your underling just cant think of what to write
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
"NO STOP! STOP IT RIGHT NOW!
Reply 16m ago #5"

make that 15 whole minutes with no response by dakoolguy maybe he just gave up
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
btw the fact that its been more than 12 hours and that fic about me you threatened to have somebody post means i defeated dakoolguy and also whichever so called underlings you claimed were writing it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Oh, but before I go for good, any chance you're LockedAttorney?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
"Are u mocking me. Or have I won?"

You've won. Or have you? I have no evidence.
icantyping chapter 1 . 4/7
ace attorney: THE EDGEWORTH CONSPIRACY

by icantyping

Disclaimer: I don't own Ace Attorney, and I don't profit from this.

miles edgeworth was in the prosecutors offece looking over his casas when the door started banging.

"MISTOR EDGEWORTH ARE YOU THEIR" shouting detective gumshoe as he forcedthe door open.

what is it detective" said gumshoe

"hey pal we got to investigate theres been a CRIME" said gumshoe

"what happened said edgeorth"

"we have a witness who herd a gun from the graveyard and they saw sombody with a gun run out off the graveyard. But that isn't all pal theres also a MYSTERY"

ā€¯hurry up gumshoe"

"ok pal listen to this when we went to the crime scene THERE WAS NO BODY"

"WHAT?" shouting edgeworth

so they went to edgeworths red sports car to go to where the crime was at

"oh hey pal I didnt know you had white wall tires thats cool" said gumshoe

"thanks detective" said edgeworth

when they got to the regular entrance edgeworth said "ok gumshoe call detective ema skye and tell her to sneak in through the giant hole in the wall the killer made meanwhile you and I will use the normal entrance"

"ok pal"

then edgeworth and gumshoe went to the security gate

"EDGEY-POO" squealed oldbag who was the security lady because all security ladies are oldbag

"NNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" screamed edgeworth "no not you w hat are you dgoing here"

"MARRY ME EDGEY-POOP!" blushed oldbag

"hey pal can we go to the graveyard we have to invest in the crime scene" said gum shoe

"no" said oldbag

"what the fuck why not" said gushoe

"because I fuckin said so whippersnapper" said oldhag

"mr edgeworth try flirting with her" said gumshoe

"no way jose" said edgeworth

"please pal"

"ugh fine but only because we have to investigate" said edgeworth and he gave oldbag his phone number but he actually gave her phoenix wrights phone number

"I WILL CALL YOU EDGEY-PIE" said oldbag and she let them threw the crime scene

"ok pal lets investigate" said gumshoe

"wait detective somethings wrong" said egdeworth "where is THE VICTIM"

"what do you mean pal oh no I DONT SEE ANYTHING UNUSUAL BUT THIS IS SUPPPOSED TO BE CRIME SEEN"

"oh shit somebody must have STOLEN THE VICTIM"said edgeworth

"NOT SO FAST MILES EDGEWORTH" someeon said

"who was that pal"

sUDDENLY THEIR WAS A MASKED MAN AND HE HAD A GUN

"its not personal edge worth butz I cant let you investigat this crime" said the assassin

"or what buster" said edge

"or THIS" said masked man and his GUN SHOOT LASERS AT MILES

"oh dang" said edgeworth and he bartly dodged by using an innocent bystander as a shield

"any last words edgeworth" said masked man

"OBJECTION" shouted edgeworth

"what" said mask man

"I dont know it just seemed apporopriate" said edgeWorth

and he pointed his laser gun at edgeworths face point blank

AND THEN SUDDENLY THE GUN WAS KNOCKED FROM MASKED MANS HAND BY SNACKOOS

"ema" shouted gumshoe

"hey mr edgeworth im here to save you guys" said ema skye who just arrived in the nick of time and she threw a snackoo at the masked mans mask and broke the mask

thenedgeworth looked at masked man and IT WAS OLDBAG

"what the fuck" said edgeworht

"I told you not to go to crime scene edgey-poo" flirted oldbag

"gee pal it should have been obvious sense her mask was that astronaut costume" said prosecutor gumshoe

"gumshoe ARREST HER NOW" said edgeworth

but just as gumshoe got out his handcuffs a limo drove through the security gate and oldbag jumped in and got away

"well shit" said edgeworth "now what"

maybe we should do see the witness pal said gumshoe

"good idea gumshow" said ema "who is witness"

"damon gant"

TO BE CONTINUING
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Do you think you've cornered me? Yes, I'm on Barrylawn's favorite list. If you want to make an accusation, use evidence.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
I also wrote a very famous fic. It was deleted, but it wasn't called dragon wright
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
I'm not camperor
I left at least one hint earlier before you were guessing but heres another: I have done a colab before
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
"Well okay then.

Bob The Other Zombie

Hotel-Japanifornia

CzarThwomp

Are you this person Little Blue Owl

Lamia of the Dark?"

I'm not any of those people
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
OBJECTION

you testified that "No I'm not him. Though he IS famous, I mean someone as famous as barrylawn favorited a couple of his fics, therefore he is famous by extension"

however I have guessed the usernames of everybody with a fix favorited by barrylawn and you have denied all of them
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7
Your guesses were;
Peoplepersonsof DooM

GamingChiliHedgehog

ApolloBlackwood

Incohatus

Rimay

chloemcg

BathsaltsMcGee

Nine of them were correct. Here's another hint: I have not commented on any of your fics under my username
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Ok, here's a hint; I dont have any fics that youve commented on, at least as dakoolguy if you really have another account
Guest chapter 2 . 4/6
Superpear8
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