Reviews for In the Bone
Guest chapter 6 . 6/22
Chapter 6: This chapter has it wrong the reason most martial arts do not use elbows and knees is because they are weak and easily hurt. In Muay Thai they strengthen these areas with a lot of training that builds up bone density (think of the training that Lee from Naruto does). In High school, college and professional sports it is often injury’s to these areas that sideline or even end sports careers.
Yamajiji chapter 16 . 6/21
Love the story. I’m getting a Kimimaru-ish vibe from him, which is really cool. Also, it was hilarious when he became an accidental baddass during quirk assessments.
Douggernaut chapter 16 . 6/21
Excellent story so far! Can't wait for more chapters!
That guy chapter 16 . 6/21
I really like the tone and execution of this story
Winter-Buzz chapter 7 . 4/24
It's been seven chapters, and I honestly can't maintain any interest in this story. First of all, I do like what you did with Mineta. It's rare to see genuine character development like that. However, you've gone the route where Izuku has his own Quirk (technically), and you barely change anything about his character or life. Wouldn't he have developed differently, having a Quirk, maybe become similar in a way to Hitoshi Shinso.

Then again, that's one of the things that truly irked me about canon. Izuku... never... exercised. He was horribly unfit, yet naively wanted to be a hero, which is physically demanding. IMHO, his fitness level was/is consistently kept firmly in the underdog-category.

I'm gonna stop here, before I start rambling. Long story short, you're execution of a good idea isn't that good. Not terrible, but not at all interesting to me nor interesting in my perspective.
aabhas.gangwar chapter 9 . 4/2
this is the best izu and inko interaction I have read soo far, nothing holds a candle infront of what you did in this chapter
both were totally in character there were lots of crying and lots of sorry but in the end they both felt good.
Dratias chapter 15 . 3/29
It's a nice change of pace seeing Mineta be respectful for once. Nice fic so far! Interesting One Punch references..
A a B b B b Y y chapter 15 . 3/28
Mineta deserves a Gold Star for respecting women. Too bad it isn’t canon.
tiguylerobot chapter 15 . 3/28
i like your fanfic so far. may i suggest you something to help you be more creative with izuku's quirk. have you ever watched x-men evolution. i can compare izuku to spyke (storm's nephew) they basicly have the same power but spyke use it differently. he is more a ''shoot style'' with his spike, maybe izuku could try to eject somes bones at high speed for a range attack. also when spyke evolve his mutation he create himself a armor of bones around his body, maybe izuku can do something, like growing bones on all his body to have a hardening quirk like kirishima and tetsutetsu. also one for all is know to boost the user's natural quirk, so maybe you can add his regeneration to be more fast with time since OFA is a power boosting.
ThiccMilfLover chapter 5 . 3/28
One Puuunnchh
ChunkyFunkyMunky chapter 15 . 3/27
*Sigh* I really am tired of all the Momo infatuation.
SonicMax chapter 15 . 3/27
Lol poor kyoka
Izuki Midoriya chapter 1 . 3/27
loved it its so good!
Guest chapter 14 . 3/25
I have no idea how you came up with this story but it is awsome and thank god for fixing grape boy now he's a decent character!
Mariolopo chapter 14 . 3/25
damn bro, every day during this quarantine I wait for this story, invested in it already lmao, good job so far!
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