Nice little chapter of home life, I like it a lot and it fits there characters and personalities quite well.

Neat chapter.

Just what does VSL stand for? Figuring out acronyms is hard

Awesome chapter. Hurray for team Ruby

I have a important question, some chapters back you had Neo find out why Cinder fucked them over and even showed Roman the evidence, why are they still helping her and not leaving Vale or attempting to kill her? This is a giant plot hole and makes no sense. If their is an explanation then can you please tell us readers?

Great chapter.

Yeah Yang is highly impulsive she doesn't wait.

My gut is telling me a train wreck coming in at the end where no 1 is happy. but i can only hope im wrong. Yang doing the attempted kidnapping is something she would actually do personality wise.

"Junior. How did Yang know I'll be here? And what my taste in drinks are?"

No hate here, follow the show and give us more of that Roman, Neo, Ruby goodness. I love that Roman cares about Ruby as well as Neo and Drei. Can’t wait to see how this plays out.

Neat chapter.

Im personally fine with following canon as long as their are changes, what your doing is good.

It's fun to see Weiss actually using her wealth once in awhile, sure she's posh and more etc... but you rarely see her use her connections due to her disdain for her dad.

It took bit of time after reading but I realized that deputy Evergreen is a cop, and what do cops generally have access to that would be crippling on her semblance? Teargas. Not sure if as stealable but flashbang would work wonders too when it comes time to fight her.

This story is awesome. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

And now Tai and Qrow have been brought in. I'd like to comment some more about this, but so far, there isn't a whole lot to go off of. I assume that they'll be more involved further down the road, which is great. Honestly, I like that they'll be involved - it makes sense that Oz would try to contact them, after all.

I will say that Tai seemed kind of callous towards Ruby early on, though; he seemed a bit too concerned with still teaching at Signal. I would think that a father reuniting with his daughter after several years would be more important than any job, but maybe that's just me reading too deeply into it and seeing something that isn't there.

Besides that, there wasn't a whole lot to comment on. Team BASL is now working to find out more, Tai is aware that they're doing it but isn't stopping them just yet, and Ruby's crew knows that they're likely being watched. It will be interesting to see how this all comes together in V2.