Reviews for Gone
Appropriate Pseudo chapter 1 . 8/5
The summary...the reviews... I am seriously too scared to read this now. I'm not ready yet. I'll come back.
Marisol rdz chapter 1 . 5/30
Me encanta tu escritura, en serio amo tus historias, espero que nunca te canses de escribir y deseo de todo corazon que estes super bien y tambien sus seres queridos, escuche esta cancion de Elthon Jhon y pense inmediatamente en sasuke cantandole a naruto, es tan ellos y describe muy bien lo que sasuke siente y piensa de naruto que la escuche y me entro mucho sentimiento por los dos, es que tus historias las cuentas tan bien que por un momento siento como si en verdad pasara, la cancion es "something about the way you look tonight", espero que la escuches y ojala te inspire a crear algo hermoso de esta pareja tan dulce. Saludos desde México.
Hot4Sas chapter 1 . 4/23
Even though it was not anger what took over me when my father died, I can definitely relate to Sasuke; the emptiness that the person's death leaves behind, the confusion, not caring about seeming crazy.
Besides, in his case, he also feels frustration after living his life the way he thought his father wanted him to. Now he has no parents, and no one to try to impress so in a way, nothing to live for.
I love how he relates the abandonment issue to Naruto; he left, because he chose too, but people also leave because that's life and they die. Shitty, but deep down we're all alone. AND, how he wants to manipulate Naruto so MAYBE he'll feel better and hurt someone so they can feel the way he feels.

Short but very intense!
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 1 . 4/14
So in the end did Naruto leave him again? I’m bothered. Sad read but I like it.
naruandsasu chapter 1 . 4/8
this is so heart wrenching, raz but the way how naruto took care of sasuke was so beautiful. i hope even in their dreams they’ll be happy eventually.
Aishirii chapter 1 . 3/14
Raz how dare you, I cried... God dammit Sasuke you ...I know he is angry and so upset and he has every right but reading this sentence "Pull that string and take advantage, manipulate Naruto because he knows his weakness"...this made me so upset, I'm so glad he learned and grew from this. I knew this would break me and of course it did...This was just so sad. I'm glad Naruto was there for him... :'/
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
I love this series very much. The emotions are so raw that I can't help but feel it. You should really think about writing the berlin one tho. Love you
Egg face chapter 1 . 3/12
The tenderness your writings always channel is something that I really would like to experience from a significant other one day. I want to be weak, I want to be sad, I want to feel low and have someone like Naruto to be there for me.

I relate a lot to your Sasuke (and original Sasuke), but yours - being written in a modern era - is much more prone to break and melt and just be a little more human than the ninja-universe one. I’ve always wanted to see a scene in the manga/ anime where he actually breaks down and shows his vulnerability, but that never happened unfortunately. It was really unrealistic to be honest—but it’s fiction after all! (And that’s why works like yours exist lol.)

I keep coming for your well-written works for many reason: I tend to come here for comfort whenever I’m feeling down. The way Naruto and Sasuke are very considerate of each other, loving, and just generally there for one another is something that really makes my heart a torch. And then there is the enjoyment factor with all your writings. The scenes are new, fresh, and simply well-thought. The dialogues are the best in my humble opinion! Which brings me to my last reason which is simply reading your works from an author’s view point to learn and eventually create my own voice in writings. You help me a lot, and I greatly appreciate it.

Have a good day/ night! ️
senoritamomoiro chapter 1 . 3/12
I missed your stories, especially those of Sasuke dream. everything feels very real. congratulations on another great story and thanks for posting here
Leenaren chapter 1 . 3/11
The dream isoc after their breaking apart always makes me so bitter and sad but funerals are just more heart breaking than ever. glad to see you back to isoc even though you make me emotional!
chibiNatalia chapter 1 . 3/11
I could leave a thousand kudos if this site would let me! The funeral is a scene I tried and tried to imagine but I always felt like I couldn't get it right - so not only was this a surprise but it also gave my imagination some direction... if you do continue this one, I'm 10000% following!
Mkayemolina chapter 1 . 3/9
What a beautifully painful story idea. The feels it’s given me so well done. Cannot wait to see what’s coming up.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/9
Its 10 am and im already crying, cool! Such a great snippet, even if it really hurts, thanks for sharing
thicc.dandelion chapter 1 . 3/9
This hurt so much, I don't even have words to describe it. You are the best at making everything feel so real. I've gotten so attached to these characters, that i feel real physical pain in my chest when I see them hurt. I was nearly crying just by reading the description in the notification i got. For a bit I forgot where the story left off, so I was worried about it being yet another dream in which one of the main characters died. Gladly that was not the case. But it still made me incredibly emotional, so...
I don't even know if you read these reviews, but there's one thing I always wanted to tell you. Thank you. The story of ISOC has been in my life for years now. I started reading it sooo long ago, but I fell in love with your writing instantly. Now I've read it countless of times, I think that I actually memorised the entire first chapter. This story shaped the way I look at life and it created some healthy expectations when it comes to my relationships (original ISOC to be exact).
I come back to this story from time to time and reread it, falling in love with it again and again. It's my comfort story, when I'm feeling down it always cheers me up. To be honest it stopped being a fanfiction for me a long time ago, it's a story of it's own. It's a part of my life. Please, do not ever think of deleting it.
Once again, thank you so much for writing it, it means the world. I would've pm'd you, but I don't see the option available, so sorry for spamming under this story. You can delete it ofc. It was just really important to me to be able to finally tell you this, after all those years.
(oh and it helped me improve my english to the point where I can express it all and finally tell you this)
Love you xx
Cafrye chapter 1 . 3/9
Oh man. Naruto puts up with a lot but death is not something most can handle rationally. I just, I hurt. Sasuke is just so confused and messed up and in so much pain. I am glad Naruto is there.
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