Reviews for Darkness of Gold
PikaMew1288 chapter 2 . 7/18
I'm wondering why Izuku has such a LOW percentage of control over One for All. I would have figured he would have had at LEAST 50% if he has been training since he was 4 years old. Isn't the reason why Toshinori was able to use it at 100% in canon because he trained for YEARS before being given One for All? Seeing as One for All is stronger with each passing Generation then if Izuku had similar Training then 50% shouldn't be out of the realm of possibility.
TheKwertyOne chapter 1 . 7/13
"so they all assumed that he was a quirkless civilian."
LOL WUT?
The Sinful chapter 6 . 7/12
I REALLY should've stopped in chapter one when Bakugo hyped Izuku. But a friend told me this was a train wreck and I'm just masochistic enough to see. But yeah, I'm done. After the first four chapters, I went to get some mouthwash because I was sure I was gonna throw up. It's like watching a child smack a bison. You know it's going to end in tragedy but you just keep watching.
The Sinful chapter 5 . 7/12
Well, Uraraka should work for Chris D'Amico. Cuz she's a toxic mega cunt.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 11 . 6/14
An epic clincher opening for this segment for sure!
Legomasterlord chapter 11 . 5/31
Wow, I'm wondering whether or not Ochaco will beat Katsuki.

Also, the part about Mineta is so true to everyone.
Tim Curry's Toxic Love chapter 11 . 5/31
I want Izuku to face Monoma so that Monoma can copy OFA and break his body violently.
Shadoath chapter 10 . 5/25
Unless part of your AU is that Endeavor wasn't as much of a dick to Shoot and his siblings, I don't see why he would show the video of Midoriya kicking 1-B's collective ass, especially after being told to not discuss it outside of UA. Is there some context I'm missing that explains why Shoto would do so?
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 10 . 5/17
Love it!
Legomasterlord chapter 10 . 5/1
Endeavor sucks.
Legomasterlord chapter 9 . 4/25
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAHA!

I'm getting excited!
hermano.ya chapter 4 . 4/24
Srsly the big honcho herself has designed ppl to train izuku for 10 years and they want to keep yomi a secret which I asume they wanted to even before OFA so I'm a bit miffed by how little sense it makes bc while ok I get that it's powerful its there to be used and trained not to be hidden. He could just not use the most bs moves like bringing ppl back from the dead but otherwise it doesn't make a lot of sense it just feels like an excuse to artificially nerf and already op izuku.

That's just me though.
hermano.ya chapter 3 . 4/24
Not gonna lie I haven't read your other fics so I have no idea why izuku's kind of quirk is so much of a big deal but I find it highly amusing how everyone tells him to keep it a secret for some reason but at the same time no one doubts that he could make it in UA, like what was even the plan for that before he got OFA?

Great job the the novel anyhow.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 9 . 4/24
They’re screwed-LOL
ElekTroz chapter 9 . 4/24
thanks for the chapter x)
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