So far, it looks really good. I think you could make this into an amazing story, your Fairy Tail and Pokemon Fanfic are already amazing, considering I've read both of then almost a million times XD. I cannot wait for more of this fanfic, I beg you to keep this up.

From Your Number One Fan,

ProfessorSiegfried

For a first chapter this was an excellent start for a stort. I wont leave any hard reviews or criticism until about chapter 3. But keep up the good work!

Wonder how Sir Nighteye will react since I'm sure this was before Toshinori had his body badly damaged by All For One.

So, is the story abandoned? It has a good premise, so it'll be terrible for ir to stay like this. I will patiently wait and encourage you Mr. Author.

Is there any way you can continue this story? It feels like it's on a cliffhanger, I'm very curious on what will happen next..

I have a suggestion in how to add Mt Lady. Have Izuku make her focus on the most important aspects of being a hero, have him suggests creative ways in using her quirk so that she doesn't cause that much property damage. Basically, more saving people, less shoving her ass into every camera she can find.

In a comedy parody of the series(known as "My Hero Academia Smash"), Yu's backstory states that she didn't even go to a hero school, because her quirk caused a lot of damage to the area. Because of this, she went to some sort of agricultural school were she helped heard cows easily with her gigantification powers. She wants to make it big, both figuratively and literally, thats why she uses tactics like stealing kills from other heros. The reason she is a city hero, instead of a rural one is because she wants to be recognized and prove that her quirk is effective for hero work.

Maybe have her show Izuku that even if she is vain and loves her fame, she still does her job pretty well and consider that she was ranked as the 23rd hero in the country, despite only having debuted a year ago. That's incredible.

Basically the idea would be Yu getting humbled by Izuku's good intentions and strategic advice for her quirk, and Izuku gaining a better understanding of her by learning how determined she is to make it big and do her duty as a hero.

Anyway, thats my two cents. Have a good night.

That was great, I have read most of your fanfics and think everyone of then is one of the best fanfics for that anime or manga please continue doin your best.

P.S: make sure you stay safe/healthy

P.P.S: I wasn't crying at all you are

Awesome, super depressing when you think about the fact sweet young Izuku got so hurt but damn I can tell this is going to be another awesome story from you. please update soon

Next Chapter Please

I can’t wait for chapter 2!

pretty sure recover girl would massively help his recovery (canon izuku frequently completely destroyed his arms an legs repeatedly and she fix him right up (if a little out of alignment) it was the constant extreme damage that would have done his arms in)
also he is a kid so it should work even better in his favor as his bones while delicate are more malleable and will heal stronger when repaired
the worst part of his injuries would be the time it takes to heal the broken bones torn muscles and nerves and the damage it would do to his body during recovery time and if something healed wrong over such a long period of time as his recovery would be
but recovery girl could not only expedite his heal time but increase his odds of full recovery sooner and minimize risk of him being quadriplegic
also it give him more time to train

bro I love this fanfiction its really awesome, and I really enjoy reading your fanfictions bro. Also could you add Neijiri Hado, and Ryuoko Tasumuri into the harem as well, because with those 2 in the harem Izuku could gain my experience to become a top ranked hero. Because the both of them have known each other for a while based on the anime so thats why I think you should add them into the harem, so that way they can help train him in all kinds of different situations.

GOD F*CKING D*MN IT! WHY WAS THIS NOT FINISHED! IT SEEMED SO GREAT! PLEASE I BEG YOU CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Ok i decided to foloow this one so i don't forget, i like harems and that Izuku suffered that makes me think the story will be a little darker (as in realistic), hopefully this also makes Bakugou less...bakugou? once he appears that is.

The fact the manga is either close to finish or in his last arc you have the advantage of that too...read the manga, manga is alwasy better! (the less said on how some novels are adapted the better)

I haven't read yet, but you said to mention, so I am. I was hoping to see Shiozaki