Reviews for Elemental Brothers
sonavelkovskaa5842 chapter 16 . 7/26
Ну и придурок Слэш. Так охото ему вмазать. О чем только думает Йоши?! Автор продолжайте в том же духе. Вы молодец, удачи, вдохновения и здоровья :)
The-Fourth-Queen chapter 16 . 7/26
YAS- TWIN SWITCHING MOMENT!

This played out perfectly- you are a genius writer! I love how Mikey could immediately tell the difference and how Donnie was slightly creeped out. These little details make this story so wonderful! XD

Can't wait for the update, keep being awesome my friend!
The-Fourth-Queen chapter 15 . 7/26
Karai is so beautifully smart, I love the way you write her! And Raph being the protective one?

I just find it so ironic that two of the most skilled and disciplined fighters in canon (Leo and Karai) are the ones forbidden to use their obviously gifted powers! It makes me snicker all the time XD

Good job Fireworks!
Nutella Swirl chapter 16 . 7/26
This update made my day so much better :)
I just want to point out something. Wouldn't have Leo been caught blue-handed, not red-handed? :D
lol but seriously, this chapter is amazing! The little scene with Tang Shen and Yoshi was sweet.
And I absolutely LOVED the last scene! I loved that Leo pretended to be Raph and was so great at it and I love how Raph came at the exact right moment. That was AWESOME!
I'll be eagerly waiting for an update, like always. Stay safe :)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/21
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Nutella Swirl chapter 15 . 7/19
Ah this is SO GOOD!
Okay, that secret passageway was so cool! And I knew something was going to happen. It's you writing this. :D But hey, it's cool Karai knows! And she helped him learn how to counteract fireballs with his power. Neat!
My suspicions: Slash will attack Leo, who will be forced to use his waterbending powers, and everyone will know. Maybe?!
Either way, this is AWESOME! I LOVE this AU so much. Keep it up :)
sonavelkovskaa5842 chapter 15 . 7/19
Еще одна классная глава. Это потрясающе. Нетерпиться узнать, что будет дальше. Автор удачи, вдохновения и здоровья. :D
Guest chapter 14 . 7/15
Looking forward to the next chapter!
The-Fourth-Queen chapter 14 . 7/14
So much is happening- and all the side-characters?! My fan-heart has been blessed. I love the beginning of the chapter with Leo and Splinter training- and Raph fighting with Angel? Beautiful! Beautiful! Beau-ti-ful!

And Splinter pondering about Leo- that's my favorite part honestly. Keep up the awesome work my friend! XD
sonavelkovskaa5842 chapter 14 . 7/14
Сплинтер не ошибается. В лео есть особенное. Автор вы молодец. Не думала, что Сплинтреа будет учить никто. И все становиться интреснее. Автор удачи, вдохновения и здоровья :)
Nutella Swirl chapter 14 . 7/14
You don't know how excited I was to see this update, Fireworks! :D
Reading Leo's thoughts while training with Splinter was amusing and great. Loved it ;)
I also really enjoyed reading about the fireball fight! That's actually super cool! Part of me wishes I lived in this AU, honestly!
And ohh boy. Leo is going to get himself discovered somehow, I have a feeling. If not with Karai, Splinter already knows something is up, so... ahhh!
But this is SO AWESOME! I love it sooo much! :)
Hope you're doing alright! (Also, I love how you reference different characters from the show!)
Guest chapter 13 . 7/3
Ohhhhh precious bean!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
sonavelkovskaa5842 chapter 13 . 7/2
Автор, это круто. Не знала, что появиться Сплинтер. Интересно узнать, что произойдет дальше. Автор удачи, вдохновения и здоровья :)
Nutella Swirl chapter 13 . 7/2
Oooh this is SO GOOD!
Of course Leo tried so many times without Raph. :D
Poor Karai, c'mon people, just cause she's a girl doesn't mean she can't train... arghhhh! But I'm so glad she can create fire too!
And I loved reading about Mikey's drama! I live for that ;)
And yesss! Leo's powers are sooo cool. So he doesn't seem to be able to control it, it just comes randomly? Or maybe at heightened emotions like fear and excitement...?
I love this :)
The-Fourth-Queen chapter 12 . 6/30
Oh-ho-ho-ho! Guess who's the wandering trouble magnet now and who's the protective big brother?! The tables have turned and I am enjoying this!

I really like how curious Leo became about other water benders- it's so LIKE him. I almost expected him to pull an Else and say, "Oh no, my powers are too dangerous. Conceal, don't feel."
But nope- this curiosity was a very Leo thing to do. Awesome work Fireworks! XD
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