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Great Chapter!
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Okay I liked the first half of the first chapter -
It was a seldom seen approach to start the harem story at that point and you get points for Haku being in it. I really like her, but you execution of what follows is in my opinion sub-par.

While it might be true that Haku developed strong feeling for Naruto in their meeting at the clearing and of what followed after you skipped this entire part, which was a prime opportunity to define their relationship furthermore you essentially skipped over the whole part, in which Haku has to get herself out of the feeling of loss regret and grief of Zabuza passing.
In how a Naruto slowly but surely gets her out of this Abyss of feelings etc

We are instantly confronted with a happy go lucky and cheeky version of Haku that wants to get into Naruto pants. Which IMO is wasted opportunity and something nearly every harem fic suffers under - the nearly non existent characterisation of the females in said harem.
With their personalities to be flat and leaving much to be desired.

No matter how big the harem - and smaller is always better because it allows you to develop their personalities their fighting style in different direction to ensure that everyone is unique not just in name. And it gives you more time and opportunites to develop them their character their wants their dreams and allows you to map out the differences they have.

Then there are some other things that irritate me, for example the Kyuubi.
The "problem" he represented was resolved far too easy ... they had a talk and now they are best buddies.
Only because Naruto aggreed to ease the detention conditions of the kyuubi - it feels like a cop out, something seen in a lot of fanfictions.
I mean i could understand it, if the Kyuubi was female and was friends with Kushina or something along those lines and saw Naruto as much as her child than Kushina did - after all the whisker marks make it clear he was nurtured by the Kyuubis chakra in Kushina womb ...
but still.

On the other hand Im a friend of either Sasuke or Naruto being female -
Their whole canon relationship in my mind would have worked out far better if Sasuke would have been the tsundere love intrest of Naruto ... the lenghts Naruto went to safe Sasuke were above and beyond of what we see in fantasy when a prince/hero tries to safe the princess ...

And i can see the beginnings of this here too.

In canon when affinity are explained it is heavily implied that outside of someone possessing a elemental bloodline like Ice such a thing doesnt exist.

Given, that in canon we see Kakashi use only 4 elements with wind not being included.
I have my own theory in this matter -

I think someone affinity determines how easy it is for you to learn the elements following the elemental vulnerability circle.
In the case of Kakashi with Lightning as his affinity would mean that this would be the most easiest to learn followed by Earth Water Fire and Wind being the hardest for him to learn since his affinity element is weak against it.

Furthermore every user of a elemental bloodline we see in canon only ever uses the elements making up this bloodline element. Which might indicate that dual affinity in the case of Ice for water and wind makes learning the remaining elements that much harder than it would be for one with just one affinity.

This way at least the elemental cycle would have more than one use ...
And most people would choose to learn the second hardest element there is after they learned their affinity to master since it counters the element that is good against their affinity.

A good example to emphazie I might not be entirely wrong would be Sasuke - he struggled really hard with his Fire-release, which is no wonder given had a Lightning affinity so he tried to learn, during his childhood the for him second hardest element before he even had mastered his affinity.
It was therefore no wonder he only took a month to get his Lightning affinity down.

But since we see mutli affinities in so many fanfiction that it pretty much is an accepted fact in fandom - I have learned to accept it being a thing ...

So I hope with this three affinites we see Naruto having 3 elemental bloodlines (every combination of two elements) and him having a bloodline expansion consisting of those three elements.

With such unique genetic make-up you have ample reason for the village to push for the multiple spouse thing aside from him being a heir of a clan -

Another thing - the Namikaze clan isnt a thing in canon - if being Hokage doesnt automatically mean your family name gets elevated to that of a clan or they did this post mortem to honour Minato then he wasnt part of a clan. He was a no name orphan born to two civilian parents.

Regarding the other girls in the Harem -
It is extremly difficult to explain girls/woman from out of Konoha being in it, with their split loyality and all. Meaning you have to give believable reason for that to be a thing especially if you consider that they might join with the sole intent to get impregnated and then flee the village with the Uzumaki bloodline growing in their womb.

So there arent many girls especially from major villages that are eligeble for this -
Temari of which makes the most sense after Suna botched the invasion and she was part of a piece offering ...
Aside from her Im hoping for seldom used girls like Karin ... perhaps Tayuya.
Mei Terumi if a little younger could be intresting, but makes only sense if she doesnt make Mizukage ... her side losing and trying to get into Konoha ... having heard of Haku being allowed in the village or something ... trying to join the Uzumaki clan ...

I always like seeing fem. sasuke because of the similarities with Naruto growing up alone it gives a good base for a relationship, you introduced her pretty well too most people have some major plot or use some weird hack like a male sasuke using the sexy juts to become a girl so he could be with Naruto that never made since to me but whatever great job on the chap looking forward to the next one.

With the whole female Sasuke thing I hope you bring Sakura in soon even if she's slow to actually fall for Naruto she's always been my most favorite plus it would add to the whole team 7 teamwork she can get way stronger to if she trains with these 3 but I think she would of course need to hear there secrets they can keep Sasuke female side from Kakashi for now obviously but still hope you think about it.

Ahhhh, I can see Kakashi doing this.
Interesting, so Sasuke is hidden got it. So tomboyish.
Anyway
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!

One thing I give you is that you need to space out your paragraphs. When Naruto is reading the letter/scroll from his father it's kinda hard to read. Paragraphs should be anywhere between 4 to 6-8 sentences. So long as it flows you should be good

Well I like tenten so no complaints about her though i would prefer Naruto get over Sakura sooner than later if at all possible, I am very interested in seeing seeing what you do with the elements you gave naruto not to many authors give him lightning idk if you had any plans for Naruto to develop a bloodline in the future I have see a few people us wind, water, and lightning to give and advanced storm style if that makes and sense. Can’t wait for the next one.

So still fixated about sakura the useless girl.

well he can be a jack off all trade using lots of shadow clones while traning.

Ahh this deal between the two is something I hoped for. Since he caused it all he would want revenge.
Gangbang killed me.
Ahh the shadow clone che...I mean training. Wish I could do this.
Interesting choice of weapons.

As for harem depends on age gap you are allowing.
In all honesty I have always liked Sakura, Hinata, Ino, and Tenten and was saddened that they where barley used. Anko was another of my favorites due to the fact she was just like Naruto.
As for other suggestions. Temari and Samui where always interesting and wished they did more as well. In all honesty there are so many interesting characters in Naruto. Yet only a few are used and grow in the story. Wanted to see the rookies each become stronger and at least show they deserve to stand next to Naruto.
Then there are the women he saves in the show and the movies I can see falling for him since he does save them like his father did his mother.
These are just suggestions that might help you find people to choose or just for ideas since I don’t know if you will do the movies.

Anywho
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!

Great chapter again the scavenger thing was a bit weird to read but it was funny, and I like Naruto and Haku interactions it’s not to much but it’s obviously there keep it up

Great story idea I am tired of all the same harem stories myself I hope you’re brings a new twist on the norm

Will Naruto meet the 5th Mizukage.

Owww, my heart. This chapter did it’s part very well. I like the clan compound as well as the portrayal of his parents.

I am all for the slow builds. I love harems and romance but the problem I have is when they are rushed. I am all for maybe one being love at first sight but I always like the build up. So herring you will take it slow is a plus.

Anyway, can’t wait to see what changes will happen to canon.

Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!