| Reviews for Brother of the Boy Who Lived |
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   Luna Rose Black chapter 10 . 10/17 Terrible. Absolutely terrible. |
| Blue Luver5000 chapter 49 . 10/11 Great chapter |
| LunaM303 chapter 49 . 10/11 whelp they're dead |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/26 James, lily, and severus should be in their 30's i assume |
| GinaKim chapter 9 . 9/22 Extremely inaccurate characterization of Lily. She may be displeased with her husband but she will not resort to immorality. |
| ninja888 chapter 9 . 9/20 An immoral Lily is a garbage story. |
| LunaM303 chapter 48 . 9/19 I know right |
| Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 9/18 Thanku |
| setokayba2n chapter 29 . 9/14 Sigh, at first it looked as another Mary Sue story like many others, now it seems to be another sweet romance like much many others... |
| LunaM303 chapter 47 . 9/14 oh yea |
| LunaM303 chapter 46 . 9/14 oh my |
| ronjon chapter 18 . 9/14 Confusion reigns. In the first chapter you refer to the divorce being several months ago. Then in the fourth (?) chapter the baby boy was born “last week”. The baby was born just after Lily torched the woman’s house while she was taking a bath. The elf told Lily the woman was pregnant BUT didn’t know how far along she was and in the next few sentences she announces she’s in labor. Maybe you should back up and re-do this part. Otherwise it has been a merry romp. |
| Guest chapter 47 . 9/11 Your stories are never dull .Finally back to work 7 months was totture and your writing made it |
| colbylg chapter 5 . 9/11 By try try gv |
| LunaM303 chapter 45 . 9/9 I love this Dudley |
