Heya kiddo! Where ya been? Too busy RPing as some shitty anime women? Finally realized how worthless you are and how hopeless you're future is? Did you die? One could hope for a gift like that in these times!

Anyway, keep up the good work of not being alive, no one misses you.

Another dead story from a brain dead reject... What a shocker. Unable to think for yourself you use the same exact plots as every other mouth breathing retard on this site! What a shocker! "Naruto" ( in reality some shitty fucking self insert pile of shit ) and some other OC garbage are stronger then every other thing ever and they're super powerful and without flaws and blah blah blah.

You're yet still unoriginal, yet still a massive failure, and yet still a parasitic pile of human trash that is so self absorbed and so blinded by the general retardation of this site to fully comprehend how utterly useless they are.

Keep looking at all those "hur dur sotry grood" Reviews. In reality there is a reason not even 100 people bothered to look at this pile of shit.

Honestly hilarious and almost horrifyingly sad that you even continue at this point.

Good

Now that is some bullshit story. Mavis strong enough to defeat great red? And Naruto stronger than Great red? Oh come on.

Good issei and Asia only.

Type your review cic

there are some grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing serious and unlike most of the Naruto stories, I like the changes here. continue please

Nice.. i like it

oh thank god
finally a story where issei rejects rias offer

You just ruined the story.

I like different from normal stories :)

love your work
keep it up

Interesting.
Your story starts good, have a good hitch for very aspects, like Mavis like the biblical God, or Naruto like the husband of Mavis.
So, when you’re going to update.
Ah, another thing, in times of the chapter you write Ofis, when the name is writes Ophis. But that is a very small wrong of orthography.
See you later!
I’ll be waiting for the next chapter of the story to see how you’re going to continue the fic.

Please continue

So mavis is the bibical god? Very good story love the start