This is amazing! I hope to read much more of your work!

Yeah... No. First of all an SI that intends to find a way home. The whole point of the SI genre is wish fulfilment. Who would try to to undo the wish ASAP? Next, writing a letter to the secret services. Oh. My. God. This is just... Stupid. First of all, you've established that the magical world still interacts with the mundane at the higher levels; and then you tell the SS that he's a time traveller. In a world with magic time travel. To the Americans. With MACUSA that don't even let you marry muggles. Right. Then telling them to meet him outside the leaky cauldron. Holy shit. Way to wave the I'm a wizard! Flag. The only way he is going to remain safe is by relying on his fame. Even then the backlash from potentially breaking the statute would be insane. Just the idea that 20 yr old uni student in a child's body could string along highly trained and experienced agents is kind boggling.

A shame you didn't think this out.

HOW DARE YOU. THIS IS AWESOME AHAHAHA

The cliff...

I hope you keep this going, i like the story so far

I understand why you didn't plan to continue this story.

My goodness can you imagine an adult in a body of child making significant assumptions about the future in Harry Potter world?

I mean the MC wants to play football/soccer in a magical school. Its like going to a moto gp track and riding a cycle through the track with Super bikes watching from side lines. lol.

MC is so illogical in thinking his 11 yr old smart enough to fool an entire 2 secret service organisation which are the most powerful in the whole world. Why? cause he doesn't have proof of Time Traveling nor he is from this Harry Potter Universe both from non magical and magical community would see him as mentally ill patient or worst arrest him for being connected to terrorism and public panic as distraction to start a new war. Come on dude a magical cup which can tie your magic according to contract with just a signature in magical world, how stupid are you to write an intelligence agency who would of course contact everyone in their power to track down and also fully search the meeting location months in advance which would reveal the magical world which breaks the statue of secrecy which would expose everything violently due to time travellers in magical community who would no doubt find it as a threat and wipe it out instead of leaving anything before.

my goodness even after the rant i just cant stomach the mc who is far better in killing himself which would create a far better future than him using his "future" knowledge to make plans to become Captain America who is a bloody British. I just can't take it anymore.

The breaking point for me was, when MC wonder in Daphne's mental stability while he risking being detained and all his muggle born friends due to his idiotic hero complex by being friends with 11yr olds. How magical community would mind wipe for silly things and moving muggle borns to magical world, I imagine the wizarding world would just wipe out all his muggle world memories and place false memories like he was part of wizarding world from the very beginning at the best or worst throw him in Azakaban with his Godfather.

You gave your best but for me, self inserts are never fixing a story or the plot line. its about the experience in living it and telling things which aren't read in canon like the experience or useful titbits that makes sense. The best he could do was to live in the world with all its faults like how we are living now instead of fixing the future. At least that's for me anyway.

I wanna complaint and rant about all the self inserts that want to return to their world. Dude your sent by higher power far powerful than anything to a world full of magic and back in 1980's in a body of a British male. Fu*k everyone of returning back to cruel world of politics and war ridden world, I will chose to become rich in muggle world and live a kingly life with a large family controlling the Share Market and Internet Boom in future.

Sigh.

I don’t know if you are going to continue this story or not, but I have to know what house he got in, if only just so I don’t obsess over it.

funny how it is that when he got his letter he can suddenly go to diagon ally as if he knew where it was, dont tell arabella though.

ive read i few of your stories now and there is a baseline that goes as follows. you are far to passive, you limit yourself to what is written on the world and dont explore outside of it, you lie a lot for all the wrong reasons and you absolutly suck at it.

this story is already following the pattern, all that misses is kissing the ass of dumbledore, seeing as he is named in the tags no doubt this will happen

5 months and not one fucking meditation excercise to find your magic. you sir are not worthy of magic

ok just wtf living with the dursleys and acting nice because arabella is watching? why the fuck doesnt he just go to the cops?

3% a month is insane. That's 31% a year, or about a third. For investments to make 20% a year would be very good, and that's in the dynamic modern economy. For more stodgy, low-growth magical economy, I'd expect significantly lower returns (5-10%, perhaps). In other words, the financial agreement would likely see Harry losing roughly a quarter of his investment each year.

awesome

The SI does not act like a kid and acts waaay too saintly. He also makes friends near instantly (Dean and Lisa are understandable; the others, not so much). Generic nice guys are both annoying and boring to read.

I find four things highly unbelievable that the SI managed to find the Leaky Cauldron by himself, him successfully escaping despite Dumbledore monitoring him (Figg would have definitely informed Dumbledore, given how much time has passed), Dumbledore not sending anyone to introduce the magical world to "Harry" , and Hagrid not even suspecting him of

Being a history buff is fine and all, but putting too history distracts and breaks the flow of the story. It just becomes a boring wall of text no one will read.

This has the potential to be a good fic, just like your naruto SI (a shame that fic seems to be abandoned). Looking forward to reading more chapters.

That wasn’t niceI was on edge to find out what house he’s in...