Wow... just no words. I hope you’re realizing that he’ll need years of therapy to get over this but oh my god this is also so wonderful! Just ahhh. Great job once again (even if your torturing Huey)

Hey. Sorry, I didn't update sooner, my sister hogged the computer all day, lol.

Oh no! Graves and Beaks are cruel monsters! MONSTERS I TELL YOU!

(I love the way your wrote this chapter! It's a great writing style you've got there!)

Oh no! Wow, Gyro isn't wasting any time. Work duckies! You can do it! Save Huey! Can't wait for next chapter!

Wow. Fenton slept for a whole day. I know the feeling of sleeping more than intended due to being exhausted.
Poor Fenton. His nightmare really scared him and seeing Huey in that position... is terrifying.
Ugh! Why did Beaks have to turn off his GPS?! ...Because it couldn’t be THAT easy.
Team Science will hijack the GPS and find Huey! Without any hiccups, I hope. (I just jinxed it, didn’t I?)
Wow. Team Science just found out that Huey is going to be more tortured!
Yeah. Gyro DOES have a soft side.

I like that you used the freakier version of Beaks from ‘The Dangerous Chemistry of Gandra Dee!’ I think it really adds to the eerie feeling of the nightmare. Also, poor Fenton! :0

Love this story!

First off Why are you being so mean to Huey. Second Amazing job on keeping everyone in character. Third this honestly feels like I’m reading a published book level writing and I mean like a really good one. Just wonderful job overall.

Louie is one of my favorite characters! I LOVE Louie and Dewey working together!
Yes! Dewey and Louie met Huey again and informed him of what danger he really is in. I just hope he believes them. If not... things will be worse.

I loved this chapter so much! It just hurt my heart. Wonder what'll happen next. Keep up the great work! You're an amazing writer!

Poor Huey! He’s going to suffer even more!
At least Graves is not evil and wants this to stop. Eventually, I believe he will have enough.
Oh boy, Beaks wants Huey to fear Gizmoduck. This will not end well.
I HATE Beaks!

Oh my gosh! Beaks has such a dark dark side. It makes me think of the villain from the book series Michael Vey, Dr. Hatch. But Hatch was kind of worse because he took Bible verses way out of context and twisted them to work in his favor. Beaks is so cruel!

Beaks is so cruel! I kind of feel bad for Graves (even if he is a villain) because he has to watch Huey suffer.

Oh my! Louie and Dewey are very worried about Huey!
Louie is still the Sharpie! Go Louie!
Aww! Webby! Don’t worry. Everything will turn out alright. Hopefully. And Dewey is so sweet to Webby!
At least the family knows how much of a monster Mark Beaks is now. And if they find Huey, they might know what to do to help him overcome the brainwashing.
I hope Huey remembers happy moments of his family in his sleep. Like his subconscious telling him to not give up.

Ooh! I have no words except I MUST KNOW MORE! I wish it was already next Saturday!

Woah they’re brainwashing him! I don’t think the family will be happy when they find out that Huey willingly decided to work for Mark Beaks.

Aww, my little Huey! Don't take Beaks' hugs! In the words of Buddy the elf, he sits on a throne of lies!