Cool concept of a story! I like the mysterious part of it, I'll be happy to follow the line of events you provide for us hah Your writing is really nice and you keep everyone in-character! It was nice stumbling across this, I have always loved ShikaTema! Keep writing.

Shikamaru is found and in the right hands at long last. But being helped can be hard after such a rough experience. It's hard to know if PTSD is going to take place or if he will be helped by the love of friends alone. Great to know he has a bunch of loved ones surrounding him now though. Thanks for sharing.

There's a nice team spirit to the beginning of this story with a little mystery too. Wondering what happened to Shikamaru and why his eyes glowed stoked the fires of imagination. It's so good Choji's presence was able to shift him back to reality and provide a rescue. Thanks for sharing!

Ooooh I'm so excited ti read more! Thank you

I love these characters. I loved the story ! hope more soon

yes a new story! love it already hahaha keep going