Reviews for My name is Alex, and I'm a new Gamer
RandomCoolGuy chapter 1 . 7/22
wait why are stat points labelled skill points in your stat page?
Death Fury chapter 6 . 7/18
excellent chapter
Death Fury chapter 6 . 7/18
excellent chapter
Death Fury chapter 5 . 7/18
excellent chapter
Death Fury chapter 4 . 7/18
good job
Death Fury chapter 3 . 7/18
good chapter
Death Fury chapter 2 . 7/18
good job
Death Fury chapter 1 . 7/18
excellent chapter, i am going to guess Hecate or Circle, because of the magic affiliation.
RandoDude chapter 1 . 7/13
Woulf you mind Bolding the game notifications? I know it takes a bit of extra time but I feel like it would improve the story quite a bit by making the jump between narration and the Game more noticable. Like it so far, not enough Gamer Percy Jackson fics out there and this one has pretty good grammar. The only problem I have is the difficulty to tell between game notifications and the first person perspective.
SmartAlek7 chapter 5 . 7/3
Hey, if you're gonna switch the point of view like that, you should add a dividing line or something that tells us when it changes. Good story though, can't wait for more.
AspiringWriterInWayOverHisHead chapter 1 . 6/27
You should really proofread your texts some more, there are quite a few typos in here.
Also, considering it's the multiverse, there should really be no reason to fear other gamers really. There's literally infinite amounts of universes with infinite variations for each of them. The odds of a Gamer finding another one should be astronomically miniscule. This is very much a case of 'The Multiverse is very much big enough for all of us' situation.
T149Man chapter 6 . 6/23
Is the Gamer ever going to work on his charisma/luck stats. He's been sheltered so far, so I'm interested in seeing how he interacts with others. He's smart and has previous knowledge, but how will the low Charisma score limit him?
T149Man chapter 6 . 6/23
I just read all six chapters out so far, and I really like this story. It's not just a good idea, but well written. Keep writing and I'll keep reading as much as you can put out.

One thing that I treasure about Gamer fics is the loot. Pun intended. A problem that other authors have when they focus so hard on the plot or characters is that they forget about the fact that the Gamer isn't just doing things to progress, but also for self-interest. Think of what drives anyone: greed, avarice, lust, wrath, envy, sloth, pride, determination, faith, loyalty, love. Many of these are esoteric and difficult to add, but the point I'm making is that if I was in this situation my greed would be going crazy at the idea of getting stronger/faster/smarter by getting rid of enemies who drop useful/valuable things. If my loot drops suddenly stopped, I'd notice right away and I'd be distraught.

So when I'm reading a story about a Gamer who diddn't notice when the enemy didn't drop something, I get turned off of the story. You haven't done that. Maybe cuz it's still early in the story, but you've done really well with the pre-fight, fight, and post-fight situations. You cover them really well.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 3 . 6/23
...oh

well I guess that was a possibility too... I feel like an idiot now. Nicely done though, staying away from the main cast of gods and goddesses is a good way to keep things original, though I would have expected his racial bonuses to be different if this was his mother? oh well.

also, quick side note, I appreciate the fact that you haven't nerfed the systen, quite often the gamers mind and body are nerfed, and so is the full health recovery on sleeping, so I appreciate the fact that you haven't. Nice job and I look forward to the rest.
NobodyOwens5 chapter 1 . 6/23
there really aren't many options here. If he speaks fluent greek then it has to be a greek one, he has a human father so it has to be a woman, trash charisma so no aphrodite, and abnormally high intelligence and wisdom so like many others have probably already guessed before me I'm fairly certain it's Athena, unless you're going with a minor goddess in which case... I have no clue
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