Reviews for A Shinobis Key
zack25king chapter 5 . 7/14
I like it so far! Hinata being part of Team 7 is a plus. Sasuke warming up to Naruto, Hinata, and Kakashi is really nice as well. I'm wondering if later down the story you'll have Naruto, along with Team 7, travel to different worlds?
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26
Beautiful, very well written and the reactions were really good
Now starts team seven training before the chunnin exams and, here's an idea, Naruto trying to work with kyuubi and learning his true name, Kurama, in order to control his chakra before the exams, Hinata learning her 360 point technique and Sasuke focusing in evolving his fire and sharingan, as well as the chidori, but of course, the three of them failing at their assignments at first, and not completely controlling their new abilities
Meeting with other characters like Konohamaru and team 10, and showing their reactions when they learn the Hyuga princess is dating the blond prankster (that has A LOT of potential to be funny) and also Naruto and Hinata having a meal alongside Iruka after their training, Naruto telling him of his relationship with Hinata, and Iruka and Hinata to have a heart to heart conversation about Naruto's past, the pain he went through and Hinata promising Iruka to always be by Naruto's side, Iruka accepting her as Naruto's older brother/father and, of course, Iruka scolding Naruto to remember his manners in Hinata's presence.
When the exams begin, before the first one with Ibiki, for team seven to finally reunite with team 8 (Sakura, Kiba and Shino) just for Kiba and Sakura to diminish and insult Naruto's training, calling him a loser and that he doesn't belong and for Hinata and Sasuke to defend him, that would be really amazing and showing how their bond is evolving and to show Naruto just how awful Sakura truly is and feel happier to have Hinata as his girlfriend
Also, encounters with heartless in order for Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke to improve their new techniques, that would be awesome
It's long, I know, but your story deserves good developing and I want to help in some way, this is really good, loving the NaruHina you showed, my name is Albert and I truly enjoy your story
Gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 6/24
this has potential let's see where this goes
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14
Love it, the concept, Naruto's keyblade, the fact that Hinata is in team seven and the progress made by all of them in their first A rank mission, I love All of it, please continue, this story is so good
I want to see Naruto's and Hinata's date and the moment they confess their feelings for each other
The chunnin exams as well, even though I know that all three parts of the exam will be really different from the original but I don't care because I love Hinata in team seven so much and how Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke are growing to become better than ever
So, in conclusion please continue, this is a GREAT and amazing story, very well done so far
GamerX568 chapter 4 . 4/10
If Naruto couldn't stand, then there's no way Hinata should have been able to stand, let alone make it in front of Naruto in time. The only reason Sasuke was able to in Canon is because of the Sharingan letting him get hit less due to him seeing the senbon ahead of time. Yes, Hinata has the Byakugan, but it only gives X-Ray/Mostly 360 Vision, it doesn't give Advanced Perception like the Sharingan.
Haxorus knight chapter 2 . 3/28
Is Sora x Kairi one of the pairings?