/Other than the grammar, good job. It's very simple, short and sweet. I like it.

*cackles* Oooh this is glorious! Those poor fools have no idea of what they've gotten themselves into. XD Hope to see more!

should work on your grammar but still overall good

This is good
Awesome
Hope there is more if it

Thanks, this fic makes me really happy. It's so fun.

More please this is very interesting

The escalation shard must be stuck between two states of mind:
-Estatic at how strong its chosen yet-to-be host is.
-Frustated that even a fight with a conflict engine (endbringer) did not allow it to connect.

You keep changing tenses, sometimes multiple times in a paragraph. It’s poor writing to change tenses in a story, keep it present tense or past tense. There are also some grammatical errors littered in this story. I’d recommend getting an editor or beta reader to go through your story and fix the mechanical errors.

this is amazing

Very nice job! While the grammar was a little difficult to work through, I absolutely LOVE the idea! Thank you for writing :)

That is awesome