I'm interested... I've noticed a few spelling mistakes but overall this is by far better than the vast majority of fanfics, especially peoples first fanfics.

You typed "wanted to take him BAKE to the Dursley'sJust pointing out a typo)

haven't seen anything wrong so far, but I'm a former Editor who is bored and willing to BETA. Can't seem to send you a pm, so I shall just offer you here in the comment section.

2 thumbs up

This is good

This is pretty good so far! Keep it up!

I absolutely love what you are doing with this story so far. I do hope that you will be able to update soon, as I really want to find out everything that will happen with Harry and Hermione

Great chapter, looking forward to more!

This is weird and jumps around far too much

I'd love to beta this! PM me!

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Meant nundus

Can Hindus have wings

I think the Lemons here fit nicely into the Chapter, and work with the Relationshipprogress between Harry and Mione. Next time you feel their could/should be some Lemonade in your Chapter, trust your Gut and do it

Pitying the poor hurt dragon.
Just didn't fly in my book.