Reviews for My Teenage Slayer Life SNAFU |
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MastaofBitches chapter 3 . 8/4 So Hachiman's gotten possesed by a Demon of some kind? Wonder if this will leave any side effects once he get's it out, or somehow just completely consumes it. |
anon chapter 3 . 4/23 You're using semi-colons wrong. They have to connect independent clauses, ie. sentences that can stand alone and make sense. For instance, 'random knick-knacks have been torn asunder; not unlike the aftermath of a tornado.' The first half is good and makes a full, grammatically correct sentence, but the second half, if separated, would just say 'not unlike the aftermath of a tornado', which is cannot stand alone and makes no grammatical sense - as such, your semi-colon is being used incorrectly. Other than this, your writing seems sound. Good luck with it in the future. |
Majin Othinus chapter 3 . 4/23 Will there be a pairing in this fic? Meguri and Rumi are immensely unreprisented in the fandom. |
Majin Othinus chapter 3 . 4/23 Oh man, things are getting more and more interesting. |
jam99chgo chapter 3 . 4/22 Pretty solid update |
TheLaughingStalk chapter 2 . 4/18 I'm interested, I like the secrecy |
MastaofBitches chapter 2 . 4/7 Pretty cool idea. Feels very "Buffy The Vampire Slayer" if you ask me. |
john15641 chapter 2 . 4/7 stay safe and healthy. wishing for the test to be negative |
Majin Othinus chapter 2 . 4/7 I'm hooked! I hope this is an 8man x Meguri fic. This pairing(along with 8man x Rumi) is severely underrepresented here on FF. I'll be praying for your recovery and subsequent upload. |
ArmantusCumPinnae chapter 2 . 4/7 mate its you who need to get healthy, and try not to contribute to the death toll. I wish you well and a swift recovery. on the other note why da hell i haven seen this fic before? awesome, the doom slayer vibe is kicking in. we need more heavy metal music. also I ship it. we need more shiromeguri in this fandom. also i dont suppose there is a chance for tsurumi? I always felt she was like 8man 2.0 or could be his apprentice. who knows now? |
7eddy chapter 1 . 4/6 Looks interesting enough have to read more chapters to get some satisfying action |
Eiji Seishuu chapter 1 . 4/4 More |
EmperorSnorlax chapter 1 . 4/2 dayum this looks interesting |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31 Interesting, I’m looking forward to where this is going. |
mp3gamefreak chapter 1 . 3/31 Interesting. I am going to keep an eye on this. |