a pissed off cyborg could be seen dragging a stunned beastboy and raven by their collars to the living room props them both on the couch and hisses at them i don't know how long it qi

lol both garfield and raven saying to victor we know that you are out there we love each other

a four eyed rage raven smirking at her beastboy ok listen up garfield mark logan you are the one that i love

Funny how Raven was never in denial about Malchior. Of course, BB isn't a manipulative, silver tongued liar like the dragon was. Hopefully this fact will make through Raven's thick skull before it's too late.

Now that's what I call an escape room!

But will Raven be able to escape from BB's clumsy advances? Does she want to escape?

Off to the next chapter.

Nice start. Two friends trusting and caring for each other. Where will it go next?

Much better than the first FanFiction I ever tried to write! There are a few grammatical things you can do to make the sentences flow better, when interrupted by an action or if a character pauses to think. However, it does not take away from the story and will come easier with time. Very nicely done and in character as well.

Damn for this being your first fic you wrote it pretty damn well:)