I wanted to truly thank you for your hard work and the effort you put into this piece. I've been sucked into this world you're created for each and every chapter, and will definitely be taking note of your storytelling techniques. I also appreciate that fact that every emotional Izuku x Rumi ship includes their 'forehead touch' to the point I'm surprised that it doesn't have some root in canon. Overall, I hope to hear more from you! Thank you, once again.

So is this story dead? 10 chapters in 1 month and nothing since. Hope it's not dead

words cannot describe how amazing this fic is. this one of the only main character get sent out of time fics that've I've actually enjoyed. the characters are likable the plot is interesting its going at a steady pace. the deku and Rumi ship is peferct. you've written them extremely well and I like the whole family dynamic your building there it feels real and both seem in character nothing out of the ordinary from either side
as for Bosatsu he comes off as well kinda of like pain(Naruto) in that whole mysterious since that's not bad but at the same time he almost feels out of place for the kind of story your writing though this only the first chapter with him in it so my thought might change after getting to know him a little more. I don't typically judge villian till there good and done so I'm kinda on the fence about him
sorry for the long review but this is an amazing fic and you should feel very proud of yourself :)

I really love your story. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Hot damn was this a good read.

Hopefully you update soon cuz I love this ship and I’m loving this story.

So I wasn't entirely sure what to expect when I read the description. I have to admit not only is this a different take on the 'time travel' shtick its a new ship i haven't seen yet and I love it. They are adorable together. Love the work you've done so far keep it up!

Love the story, but your deku has been nerfed so much it bugs me. He was well into his second year of high school when he was sent to the past. In cannon he was at 45% at that point. You still have him at 25 and he's been there for 6 months. He should be 45% plus 6 months of progress. Minimum 55%. But really 60-65. Just saying. Still love the story.

Ok 1) that was fucking amazing I loved it.

2) this is definitely one of my favorite stories on the site, you definitely have an amazing style of writing and great way with words and themes.

3) the development in the story is so real, I can't find another way to describe it.

And 4) please tell me ur going to update this story! I love the pairing, and the family and the action and trust everything about it!

Will he stay in the past permanently? I wonder how that’ll make things when time passes and he comes around to the same time when he was hit by Kronos. Also why do I have some sneaking suspicion Bosatsu is Kronos? Either way great story, I really hope you can update soon!

Easily one of my mha, time travel, and just fics in general favorites of all time. Hope you find the time and proper personal circumstances to continue writing for it again, or that the work isn’t fighting you too much if we’re all lucky enough for you to already be continuing.

Huh, so that’s what leaving a comment/review feels like.

I don't like your deus ex machina weirdo villain(?), but the story is neat and seems like it's finally getting into gear!

This isn't Naruto, and Demon Slayer already showed that just using English doesn't detract at ALL when it comes to technique names.

Stick with English.

Bosatsu came off as super manipulative, power hungry and dark, but without motives I won’t completely judge him. The shinchu seem like a shadow org but I’m a little more focused on Takuma and his group now that there’s some real background and purpose there. This was a great read so far, thank you!

Okay I just binge read 10 chapters in 1 sitting and I have to say this is one of the best time travel fics I've ever read in general. Although I have to say that maybe you should focus more on Mirko I feel like she's barely a character the only real development that she has is that deku describes that she has told him about stuff about herself but you don't really show that too much. She just feels like the love interest and nothing more which feels like a disservice to her.

I really liked this fanfic! Waiting for the next part! I would like to see more moments with Izuku and Rumi as father and mother to children! I also hope for some intersections with the Canon: for example, soon there should be a fight All Might and all for one :) good luck!