...for some reason...I just imagined a fic where Tyrian was Harry under a spell causing him to be insane due to going against the control. Now should someone track him down via magic, Salem would realize to check him for spellcraft and find the issue, making him sane by undoing the control. Sound like a good idea for a fic?

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Your Tyrian is terrifying. He seems to be his normal self rolled up with some mad hatter for good measure...

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Oh no... competent Scopboi

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Awesomeness

Yep.. That pretty much sums it up, Fox, and it is the UK/British Ministry of Magic that's "footing the bill" for this one.. I think.

Awesome please continue

So at least one, if not most, of your plans have backfired on you, eh White Bee? *chuckles* Harry warned you that this would happen when you double crossed him!

Snape, Snape, Severus Snape, Dumbledore has left you behind. He has left you to rot. Why? Because you have chosen a path that he cannot save you from.

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tbh despite all my comments on the first part of this series I actually like this story. The parts I mentioned need refining but actually Harry kicking butt and taking names and all his swearing and insults make me cackle

If I might point out something I noticed about Blake though. Her story in cannon has heavy parallells aimed at a person abused by their significant other, broke away from said other and found a new lover who slowly helped her heal then got scared off by the abuser hurting her new beau and then was later able to finally overcome the fear and torment her abuser/stalker wiith her lover's help. Its...actually scary how well her story's done to match that kind of situation.

But I honestly wouldn't change Adam being Harry's partner. Perhaps you should use the chainsaw guy as a simmilar thing but instead of abusive lover he's like an abusive parent/relative to both Adam and Blake.

idk, just some thoughts

Kobi
Adam
Damania
Nanuuk

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DANK...XD LMAO

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