This was an absolute pleasure to read. You're an extremely talented writer and you have a gift with words. Please, continue to write more.

This is the second after-Naboo fanfic that I actually like. No anger over supposed betrayals, no broken relationships. Thank you, it simply completes my imaginated time after TPM had Qui-Gon not died!

Ohhh... that was immensely touching. If only the AU could be the reality, that Obi-Wan could still have had his master-alas. But that's the case here, and it's remarkable what you did with it. It's always great to see that people can be such good friends even after they've drifted apart. :]

I loved this! it was heart-breaking but also heart-healing.. very nicely done :) I loved the relationship between Qui and Obi :D

Have to admit the first 2 chapters and then the last 2 were the best of this. The middle ones seemed to get lost amongst themselves somehow...it was like - I'm not sure I can explain it right so apologies if this is confusing - the plotline got lost in the middle and we ended up with something else instead. For a few chapters it didn't seem as though any actual 'coping' was occuring or whatever you want to call it. Though I did very much enjoy the little flashbacks and I think those were the second most memorable thing about this.

On the whole, I did like it. The ending chapter was perhaps my favourite because it was just suffused with light and warmth and well fluff (yet not what i'd call fluff if that makes sense) whereas the beginning was the exact opposite of this. Certainly it was a joy to read the character interaction between these two and the comparisons the two kept doing to past and present. Anyway, compared to some of the other SW fiction I've read from you this is amongst my least favourite. Sorry.

Aww, this was a sad story! I love how you portrayed the relationship between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon. It was absolutely beautfiul! Nice done.

Hurt wrenching thus far but well written and definitely better than trying to work on my history paper. :) Poor Obi-Wan but I love the characterization on Qui-Gon.

Poor Obi! That was so good! :)

oh that was good, i really liked this story.

This is my favorite story that you wrote.(But I love them all!) Please come back!

Oh my gosh...I read it in one sitting. You are a very descriptive, talented writer! Keep up the good work. Your capturing of the emotion is amazing. Wow...O.o

I truely loved this story. Good job on it! I hope to read more of them in the future.

Oh, poor Obi! *sniffles*

What have they DONE TO HIM?

Hey, great story!

Wow. This was a great fic. I've been reading through some of your other stuff, and I've come to the conclusion that you, my friend, are a genious. Your works are just so... so freaking eloquent; they're how I've always aspired to be able to write. Keep up the EXCELLENT work; I'll be watching you.