Reviews for the Story of Merida and Hiccup
Althea Sirius chapter 2 . 7/6
A few errors here and there, but a good start to the story.
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 7/6
Great start! The tie-in with the war story was great.

And its Chief, not Chef. That's a kind of cook.
Moll Pecksniff chapter 2 . 4/15
This is really good, so far. Apart from a few grammar and spelling mistakes (and using the word barbecue instead of barbarian!?), I really like it. Can't wait for more!