No! Don't stop! This thing is great. The spelling errors are easy to ignore once you get use to them, and while I do think your treatment of Mabel is a bit much, you are the writer, so it's your choice about how to portray them. Also, an idea. After you finish the show, you should write the character reactions to AU's. like Monster Falls or Fright Falls. That would be good to read.

Um, what is this shameless piece of propaganda I’ve stumbled across?

Its been two months are you okay?

don't let idiots make you stop writing a good story. i love the story and can't wait for you to continue.

I think you are a great writer! I love the story so far and can't wait to read more. best of luck on writing the upcoming chapters.

I think that it is your own opinion that should matter to you. I have only seen a few episodes and I have to agree that Mabel was being a brat. Anyway, keep up the good work! P.S. I like how you gave everyone that deserved it their just desserts.

Please update I wanna know what happens next :( it's been a month...i think I know you probably have something else that has more importance going on but I still do want an update I really like this fix :)

I like reading about the character's various reactions to what was going on. It gives an interesting perspective to the story. Unfortunately, lots of things don't seem to addressed in the show; that I like are here. It sounds like some comeuppance is coming in multiple layers so to speak.
Grammar is a minor issue, since I will admit that there were a couple times I had to reread to understand what some sentences meant.
Please, don't let those with hateful comments tear you down. It is one thing to write constructive criticism to help you grow as a writer and it is another to bash someone's writing just because they do not like it. So-so(s) being mad at the world, has no right to take it out on others? Where are people's self-restraint these days? Regardless of flamers, well wishes to you and I am hopeful to see updates.

Pleas conntinue this story is awsome and can you Maby make a story were they watches dipper but he turns into a Wendigo.

Please update soon! I love the story!

Ding Dong the witch is dead

Ignore the haters they are assholes

Your story is very cool and you are too

I really find this enjoyable to read.

It's not much, considering I'm a sucker for reaction Fics, but my opinion still stands!

Anyhow, Hope there's more!

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