| Reviews for White Mage |
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   Dav009 chapter 2 . 7/15 I read your first story “One Frail Boy” this story is a great improvement. I look forward to seeing more in the future. |
| Spellflame chapter 2 . 7/8 ... if he can be a skeleton, I imagine flesh blows, bleeding out, and organ damage will not be fatal! |
| Spellflame chapter 1 . 7/8 Brilliant! |
| Jerry12344321 chapter 2 . 7/6 moar |
| Nightmare-Genocide chapter 1 . 6/14 Please continue, I’d like to see what happens next and it’s been a few months/years- it’s been a while since you posted. So, I hope you can post some more chapters or at least finish this book when you can. See you never/soon. |
| goldshqipe chapter 1 . 5/16 Hi forgot to add this CAN YOU PLEEEEEASE MAKE HIM LAZY Like not a lot but just a bit like Sans |
| goldshqipe chapter 2 . 5/16 Cool story bro, if you don't mind I'm gonna ask a few questions and can you answer them? Will Naruto have all Sans's power? Is he gonna meet Sans Will he go in undertale? Will he meet Chara or Frisk Pretty nice, and if there is a pairing hope you can do a Naruto x Chara because haven't seen one of them Keep up the good work |
| Dylan-A-Friend chapter 2 . 5/9 Nice! |
| Firehedgehog chapter 2 . 5/9 niice |
| WazzapMan chapter 2 . 5/9 Niceeee |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/8 I'm here from One frail boy! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/2 do more |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/15 So when can we expect the next chapter |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11 This is really good! |
| tai61045 chapter 1 . 4/7 It's a good story but shouldn't the metallic g ey eye be in the left eye socket ? Or is he actually blind out of the right eye? |
