Reviews for Not Forever Aloha
Cubit2 chapter 1 . 5/27
This was a terrific fix-it coda. It makes sense that Catherine would be along for the ride, enjoying her sleeping buddy for a couple months and then wanting to go back to the spy game. She's just like Doris, after all. Steve wandered around and, like Dorothy in Wizard of Oz, realized that everything he needed was back home where he left it. Danny understood what Steve needed and had the inner strength, especially with Grace's presence, to move on while he waited for Steve to return. No anger, no condemnation when Steve came back. Danny is perfectly loyal to a fault here. Nice job.
thefirefliesdance chapter 1 . 4/17
makes so much more sense (and is truer to the characters) than the crap-a-nale lenkov concocted.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
Marvelous! I knew I wasn't alone in being dissatisfied with the finale. I was OK with Steve ending up with Catherine, even as I didn't love them as a couple, but no way would Steve leave Danny so soon after Danny had been shot. I could see this story being canon. And...I really want to know more about Lincoln using a grenade to blow a door off its hinges! Well done!
lafbnz chapter 1 . 4/9
thank you... i hated the idea of steve staying with cath - the person who left him multiple times... never of fan of hers
Marian Simonetti chapter 1 . 4/8
Loved this...we can only hope that will happen but not going to get my hope raised...but live your writing...please do more.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7
Much much better than what we got. The way Steve left was just awful.
Arnie1701 chapter 1 . 4/6
I didn't like that they left out Grace and Kamekona out of the finale...
Sarai chapter 1 . 4/6
I like it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
Thanks for this fix it fic, we definitely needed it after that horrific finale.
cargumentluv chapter 1 . 4/6
THANK YOUUUUU! I’m so thankful that you fixed that episode. I’m looking forward to reading Danny’s perspective.
Andrea Wells chapter 1 . 4/6
So good. Just what we needed. Thanks
benswa chapter 1 . 4/6
Good story!
Joan Ferguson chapter 1 . 4/6
This is how I envision the "ending" eventually playing out in my mind. Just because Catherine was on the same flight as Steve, doesn't mean that they stayed together much beyond that flight.
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 4/6
Another better ending story I have read. This would be so good if it would of happened on the show. Steve take time off and then come back. ( Alex himself could do less stunt himself that's what the stunt double are for) . If he did maybe the show would of lasted longer.
Bethesda551 chapter 1 . 4/6
I definitely need more. I still don't like catherine. I still hate the finale.
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