XD I love it! Absolutely hilarious!

ROFLOL

I read an MLP porn comic similiar to this story, some years ago. But the only difference was it was tagged gore, and featuring Fluttershy being cut up.

Cookie Warlord
... You turned Fluttershy into Fluffle Puff... Rainbow Dash has mega static cling, Rarity has literal "wild hair" and Pinkie is according AJ... Yup it's a hair raising event.

You're awful for writing this? Maybe, but so am I for laughing at it.

Genius! Honestly though, I think Rainbow would actually like her hair.