I did that thing where I don't review immediately then I forget everything I wanted to say, but to be honest it would just be a huge string of "ohh my god hot amazing perfect HOT" so... Let's sum it up by saying I love this so much. Harvey boy finally got his dick some happiness :') thank you for this awesome story, so perfectly executed.

Whew, that was hot. Kinda seemed like that was the end, but you should totally keep it going!

There were so many good lines that I just loved, but this was one of my favorites:

"Fuck, I'm sorry," he breathes out, as she trails her fingers up his neck and behind his ear. "I can't believe I can kiss you. Can't stop," he mutters out low and gravelly.

Whoaaaa! Mind blown! Love bossy Donna! Screw dinner! Haha. I always thought this is how 8x16 would go, you did this whole story justice! I’m enchanted by your writing skills. Smug Harvey is perfect!

It really worthed the wait !
IT IS SO HOT !
And do I understand there might be a chapter 4 ?
Pleeeeaaaaase ?!
Thx

Please please continue writing Darvey fanfic. You are such a talented writer! Got so excited when I saw another chapter ! I also love your previous work too! You write Darvey perfectly ;) m

Hot hot hot

Speechless.

I really didn’t think this could possibly get better but then “Turn around” and “On all fours” and that’s It. Just lay me down in the street and run me the fuck over.

Spot the F on!

Then you manage to work in “inevitable” and “you’re mine” and it’s just jackpot after jackpot after jackpot. God. How lucky am I to have read these all in a row?

Time for me to find some privacy...

Welp. You know how sometimes people are afraid that a sequel won’t live up to the hype of the original? Yeah, well this isn’t that.

Chapter 2 was also incredibly hot! I fucking love how smug and cocky Harvey is. The way he was teasing her in the office. God that confidence is soooo SEXY!

I think the biggest turn on about This character was his cockiness. It just does things to me! And this! With Donna! Fuck me up.

I love how ALL IN she is. Like, damn. I’ve waited 12 years to be fucked by you and I’m not letting this chance slip away. Who gives a flying F about all our issues and bad choices and past relationships. Oh and that rule I used to have. Just bend me over and give it to me hard.

Standing ovation for Donna everyone!

On a more serious note, your writing is fabulous. All sex talk aside you are so talented. Your writing flows so seamlessly I just can’t stop reading until the chapter is done. So descriptive. So fluid. So engaging. Seriously, it’s awesome!

UMMMMMMM. IM SORRY BUT WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK!

Am I aloud to say that here? I mean, if you can write smut as hot and sexy as that, I feel I should be able to express my true feelings.

First of all, I need to fly to the UK and kiss FayePegJo for sending me this fic.

Second, how was my life just going to continue in its merry way without this fic. I mean holy hells bells. I’m still trying to catch my breath here.

Third. Wow. Just wow. That was so hot I literally had to fight the urge to reach in pants. Again. I’m sorry to be so blunt but I don’t how else to get my point across.

Four, I have some weird fetish with Darvey having phone sex and this hit EVERY SINGLE NERVE IN THE BEST POSSIBLE WAY!

Okay. I’m worried I might be scaring you at this point so I’m just going to tweet something about this masterpiece and then dive into chapter 2.

Holy shit. Ok. I’m okay. I’m okay.

Wet

That was incredibly hot!

Ooooof you have the dirty talk down! Very, very hot, indeed.

The hottest thing I’ve read!

oh my fucking god i have been waiting for this for a very long time and i can't breathe hole fucking shit that was HOT

You nailed it!
I have read a lot of these but this one took all the cakes ever made!