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Dood i love this please keep it up luv to see another naruto that keeps the true character traits

Just read all the chapters at once, and I some things to say. Unfortunately, they are not necessarily good, I just try to review honestly. So don't take it personally please.

I'm absolutely happy you chose a Naruto who has all of the bijuu in him. I like OP MC. Now, I just hope your Naruto is not just a four pony tricks (Rasengan, Shadow Clones, Sage Mode, Bijuu Chakra Mode). It would be great if he had taken to fūinjutsu which is his legitimate right and if he learned other jutsu than the ones I just listed. With his shadow clones, he has the potential to learn a lot of them, and with Kakashi who know a lot it would be easy.

Now on to the points I either don't like, feel weird or are inconsistent.

I'd like to start with your A/N at the beginning of chapter four. You said that Naruto couldn't wander in town or ever elsewhere because he had no papers? Seriously?! He's a fucking godamn ninja and you think he's not able to get false documents? And even without that, a henge or a genjutsu and the matter is settled. And you said he could get caught by cops, of all things? You think the strongest ninja of the Elemental Nations would not even be able to avoid forces of order? I won't talk further on that matter because it's just ridiculous.

I don't have much of an issue with Naruto telling Azazel he's from another dimension. Like you said, he didn't reveal his abilities.

About Naruto's decision to stay in Kuoh a in chapter two, "He squashed the idea of travelling the world to find people because that was just plain stupid. And Naruto was not stupid, he was an idiot but he wasn't stupid. There was a big difference." I don't understand why it would be stupid to wander the world. On the contrary, he would be able to collect informations on the civilization and on the supernatural world. Plus with his Kage Bunshin and a henge, it would have been most easy.

Because honestly, the information given by Azazel is very limited. He only talked about the three Christian factions while letting the others out. And he tried to get him into his sh*t.

The excuse of not attracting attention by going into the nest of the devils, aka school is absurd. If he wanted to avoid getting noticed, he should either have left the town or at least not have come near the school.

As for the senjutsu part, how can Koneko have senjutus chakra while she never used it, or at least not since her sister 'went crazy' after using it a few years prior. Her chakra is her own chakra, it's not senjutsu chakra. And their shouldn't be any remnant of it considering I don't think she ever used it. True, as a nekomata she has the inate ability to use it, but the fact is she didn't.

As for the pranks, not that I didn't like it, but can you explain me how only Naruto and Akeno didn't go into the hallway. If you think rationally a few seconds, if you're about to go out of the classroom but you notice the one before you is slipping on the hallway, you don't go on the hallway. So while five or six of the class students could indeed have become victims, I hardly see how the whole classroom would. As for the writings on the classroom, it's just writings and I don't see how it could make students scream like that. I know it was intended to be crack, but even crack has to have a modicrum of logic.

As for the pairing, I personally hope it won't be a harem. If I had to go for one girl in particular, none of Rias or Sona's peerage is attractive. Yasaka is okay, but she was done so much time I grew tired of her. Serafall could be good. As would Tiamat. No Raynare.

Well that's about it. Sorry if I sounded a little harsh, it's because I commented the equivalent of five chapters at once. But even if there are points I don't like, I do think your fic has potential. It will depends of how things turn out I guess.

Thanks for the chapters.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

Will characters from naruto universe also appear in the story?

next chapter is gonna be funny

Great chapter looking forward to more

Or depending on how you look at it.
Sona has Naruto tied up. "Tsubaki get the strap!"

Hehehehehehe lol! Hole you go harem and incest route!

Harem times infinity

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

pls continue writting dear author. also best of wishes for whatever you are doing in your life

Good thing I decided to take a look at this crosover cause the story is so interesting. Naruto's interactions with the other characters are so entertaining and I hope he will have a harem of at least two to four girls.

Thanks and take care

nice story! I like the different take on it

Apocalypse dragon? I thought Great Red was the Dragon God of Dreams.