Reviews for Mask Versus Mask |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's too much to hope for considering this is 40K we're talking about but god dammit I hope they let the Vortigaunts off easy considering they want to help humanity because of Freeman. |
![]() ![]() Oh great so now the people of half life are now gonna deal with another tyranical empire. |
![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Those areas are assigned to other regiments" So either Vostroyans or Valhallans? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has quite an interesting premise and a good amount of potential as well. Good grammar and character-building; I also like your G-Man voice and the fact that the Kreig Death Korps will be handing the Combine's ass to them :-). Keep up the good work, will await next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() While the story seems interesting i do hope you tone down the speech quirks in future chapters. The meeting conversation might have been flavorful but it was also a pain in the posterior to read. Between the random italics, random bolding, hyphens thrown into random words for no apparent reason, ellipses everywhere... yeah, i was feeling a headache coming on by time i reached the end. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait for the Xenos to have some Krieg hospitality |
![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() had me at degurechaff |
![]() ![]() se ve interesante |