That was great! I like how you have all the characters on point. I like this side of Sephiroth️. I thought the volleyball part was cute.

I may have melted a little when he asked if he could court her. Just way to cute. The way you write Sephiroth’s dialogue and the interaction between him and the other characters especially Tifa and Genesis is so good

I enjoyed each chapter. It made me want to eat a burger and fries. Chapter four was cute. Hopefully you make another chapter. Interesting story about these two. Love it!

I’m really enjoying this story so far. I have nothing really constructive to add but I’m liking this story line and I don’t read much TxS pairings but you got me hooked on the first chapter