What a tale! P&P and mysterya great mix! Quite some surprisesand good, funny ones at thatwell writtenand so very cleveeer!
Thank you so much.

OMG. I LOVED THIS. You are an EXCELLENT writer. Great story. Five stars.

I love it! What a great story. I like the subtle changes in character and circumstance and the very different yet satisfying outcomes. Well done! Thank you do much for making this available to read!

Wow! Yes, I hated Colonel Fitzwilliam in this version, and not everyone was the way I would want. But you wrote this to be entertaining (I assume), and it certainly was. Thank you very much for sharing!

Thank you. I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I was really disappointed in Bingleys lack of backbone and taking a mistress...outrageous. Janes enabling character and inability to stand up for herself. I did love your courageous, principled and passionate Lizzy and Darcy. Very well done. I literally could not put it down.

Excellent story. The surprise of Air Lewis was wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing.

Thank you for a wonderfully interesting story!

Brilliant story, thank you for sharing it with us.

Excellent story with quite a few twists and turns. Thanks for sharing it.

All the stories I've read of yours so far, are so entirely unique. What an imagination. This one was really complicated, but that was warranted. I could not figure out how you were going to bring this to its conclusion. I loved how you arranged Charlotte's life.

Thank you very much for this great story! I adore how the plottwists worked and that all got a just desert.

Nice story...thanks

Oh dear!
Lady Catherine's husband...

Oh oh, Darcy's uncle ... is he a male version of Lady Catherine?

Oh my! This Hunsford proposal has the potential of a nuclear weapon...and our dear Colonnel has been poisoning lizzy's opinion more then Wickham himself.