Reviews for Every Second Counts (A McRoll in the REAL World Story)
ToZiKa chapter 1 . 5/21
I imagine it's gonna be a whole lot easier for Steve, who has Cath and his in-laws and Danny and Grace to explain and to make them understand, than it was for Danny, who had an angry ex-wife to make it even worse...
FicreaderT chapter 1 . 5/16
Definitely one of the challenges of balancing a job like Steve’s and a family. But I have no doubt they’ll all weather whatever comes their way.
J chapter 1 . 4/28
Excellent story! Very good!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15
As always a good story!
Dee47 chapter 1 . 4/15
I adore Daddy Steve. Loved this!
Sarai chapter 1 . 4/15
awesome
Shelley67 chapter 1 . 4/15
Oh such a touching chapter. It is also great he has Danny to turn to as well since Danny has gone through and felt everything Steve is feeling and going through right now.
Zheth22 chapter 1 . 4/15
ahh so sweet! Also nice to see them struggle a little and over come it!
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 4/15
This as a fantastic story. The depth of emotion on Steve's part as profound. I'm so glad you're created such a deeply motivated character to be a daddy. Great insight.
christin.wilson2 chapter 1 . 4/15
Touching story
SteveMcGarrettLover chapter 1 . 4/15
I am always so impressed with how you tackle real world issues, and make them so sweet. Steve and Danny's talk was wonderful, and this story was just the perfect thing for this morning, for me. Thank you very much, and stay safe!