Reviews for Chuck Versus the Coincidence
Jdoughten chapter 4 . 8/24
I am loving this story. I hope you continue with it.
CraigBes007 chapter 4 . 6/22
thank you a very good story.
michaelfmx chapter 4 . 6/3
Well...I think I probably speak for the majority of your fans when I say that I wish this tale had lasted longer. We'll be left with the curiosity of how they grew together after this chance meeting. With that said, what a refreshing little story this turned out to be. Their chance meeting ended up being a whirlwind 24 hours where their lives changed for the better so dramatically. Seems like they were both in a rather stagnant part of their lives and both needed a reason to get energized again. Well, they found that in each other. It's up to our imagination to figure out where they go from here. Can't wait until that next story inspires you and we get your next new story. Stay safe.
Mike B chapter 4 . 5/14
I love what you are doing with this story so far. I like that they already made love ️, their going on a date, their working together and they figure out that they can do it. That’s good and I am pretty sure they will figure out that they are in love . Knowing you their is going to be something that they will have to solve together . Thank you .
mjd1969 chapter 4 . 5/13
The end? Noooo! Need more! It's a such a fun story.
baldcoder chapter 4 . 5/13
Really great update. I'm really enjoying this story.
caf1683 chapter 4 . 5/12
Loving it.
DestianaCaldin chapter 4 . 5/12
This is the story I didn't know I needed ! And I'm really happy you are sharing this with all of us ! This is amazing and the writing is so on point ! I can really imagine them in this situation and universe ! Thanks again for this 3
michaelfmx chapter 3 . 5/12
Damn it, I missed my chance last chapter to say it. I wanted to say that his new job might be at her firm, which would make it so much fun to see how they handled it, but I couldn't pull the trigger since he was a computer guy and she's a lawyer. Legal engineer? Who would have thunk it? This is going to be lots of fun.

Now, that opening scene...phew. You really have a fantastic ability to make a scene kind of steamy without actually making it steamy. That scene was totally PG...well, almost totally, but yet you certainly felt the emotions and sexual tension in it. Well done, I think you portrayed that perfectly. The key to me was always going to be the morning after. Would either of them wake up with any ind of regrets. I mean, they could have. Not because they didn't feel a connection beyond the physical, because they clearly did, but because this moved so quickly, which neither of them was really ready for or had any experience in.

So it was great so see that, even if there might have been a touch of awkwardness, that was easily overcome with how happy they each felt about being with each other, and even waking up with each other. This is clearly not the Sarah from many other stories that protects her personal life fiercely. Or maybe she is but just not with Chuck. I imagine that they are going to find some bumps in this road, but they got off to a wonderful first night But how will this new development alter things. It's going to be interesting to find out.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/12
This is awesome can’t wait for the next chapter! Keel going please
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11
Ok I absolutely fucking adore this story. These two are adorable and I love everything about them.

Thanks for the great chapter!
Amelia Wolfson chapter 4 . 5/12
This chapter was very enjoyable, the crossed lines and awkwardness had me chuckling nearly the whole time. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Tpsoftballdad chapter 4 . 5/12
Great hopeful place to leave our favorite couple. Thought for a bit that Sarah losing control of her work situation would have her pull back and clamp down on things between them. Luckily Chuck with his exuberance was enough to hopeful lead these two to a happy medium. Again just a wonderful job with their banter and their inner thoughts, so enjoyable. And should you ever choose to return to this universe, there is so much more you could tell. Thanks so much for a really great story.
coreypeters009 chapter 4 . 5/12
Loved it, please keep this story going because I would love to read and see how this story ends. I also saw you mentioned Carina, can't wait to see what happens when she gets introduced to Chuck. Good luck and stay safe.
michaelfmx chapter 2 . 5/12
Sorry, I've fallen a bit behind in my reading, but I'll catch up soon. Obviously, these two have made a pretty intense connection right away. Chuck has just been completely swept off his feet by this beautiful, and somewhat enigmatic, woman, and Sarah has found this guy to be a completely fresh breath of air on a day where she was getting to the point where she felt she couldn't breathe.

So, even though I think we all, as readers, know that their immediate connection is very real and very deep, I think that Chuck and Sarah are going to wonder if what has happened so far, and what seems is going to happen soon, is just a factor of circumstance. Particularly Sarah. Because if things go as they seem they are going to, she's going to wake up in the morning with a relative stranger in her bed and wonder what is going on. And there is no way Chuck isn't going to feel weird about it. It could lead to some uncomfortable, but fun to read, situations. Can't wait to find out.

As for the events in this chapter, they were just fun to read. Their banter was great and Chuck does seem to have a little more self-confidence around Sarah than we might expect him to have in a first meeting kind of situation. Especially given how taken he clearly is by her beauty. It seems as if their honesty and directness with each other has kind of surprised them both, almost like they're not used to it. When they each have time to think about it, they'll hopefully realize that their willingness to throw caution to the wind means something about the other person. We'll see. Great job as always.
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