Seems kinda weird that two portals open up in America, yet China is the only major nation without a portal in it.

This fine story seems to be off to a good start, I look forward to reading more it, keep up the good work.

How many gates are in Falmart?

Poor Duran.

well this is an interesting story, looks good so far even if the story pace was a bit fast, anyway keep going

it is good so far but please continue. I want to know what happens next.

Looks like a good start.