Liked the Chapter. Not sure if Piccollo should have said the last part but might as well...

Cell or Piccollo?

HaHa Ha!

My last review was in the negative but this review shall be in the positive...

I really liked how you showed Gohan in this chapter. Not acting wimpy or happy but showing he is upset and sad while trying to not show his emotions. That is way better than before... Way to go on making this story great! I am going to read more now.

I was ready to hate Video in this one, but you've managed to withhold my anger towards her. I like where this is going.

I enjoyed it!

J'aime bien

Videl devrait avoir toute suite reconnu picollo elle dit qu'elle la vi des dizaines de fois et elle devrait avoir fait des recherches sinon son statu de détective n'est qu'une façade.

Le trucs est quelle est persistante et il ne faut pas qu'elle soit de son mauvais côté.

Videl jai envie de la frapper frapper.

Cest le seul truc que je déteste chez videl sait quelle ne peut laisser tranquille quelqu'un.

Excellent story so far, I love that you tackle Gohan’s anxiety and grief (surprisingly few stories I’ve read due) I’m very much looking forward to the next chapter.

great chapter
update soon

Gohan doesn't want to let on he can fly?

Awesome chapter.

videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan son uh uh you are the one that will be flying me i seen how cell could fly without a jetpack so i know that you can fly then jumps in his arms bridal style