Reviews for Take You Home
her-majesty-wears-jeans chapter 1 . 4/24
“You are the most beautiful sight both my eyes and my heart have seen,” A lot of syrup in the champagne, eh Valtor? Or wait, if he was driving, was it that he drank soda instead? Anyway, my point stands xd
AND to top that of with a kiss on her hand are you kidding me?!

”smiling when she chuckled even when it was in the midst of an eye-roll” Idk, I just really really loved this image

Shoot, Valtor is with me there that Griffin shouldn’t complain about heels (how she does it is beyond me, I’m always tempted to throw mine off the balcony).

”gave him the opportunity to wrap his arm around her waist and pull her closer to him like he’d wanted to the whole time but he hadn’t wanted to draw not only the eyes but the whispers to them, too, when he’d known she hadn’t been comfortable anyway” Clever words and cute substance :)

”They would make for one hell of a murder couple despite Griffin’s usual kindness and his oath to never become like his mothers who may have gotten away on the charges of murder but he knew they were guilty through and through.” You know what I’m thinking.

”Griffin threw her clutch on the couch and went straight for the shoes, leaning on him as she unclasped the straps that held them to her ankles.” This was pretty much the exact mental I had when I wrote the ask! Thank you!

3 things from the following paragraphs: they’re so domestic and behave like an actual couple! Valtor falling asleep to Griffin’s breathing! I’m a puddle! The third thing, though, I neeeeeed to see them in formal wear. Gosh.

Okay, everything about Griffin’s neckline and the arm candy part. I’m amused and delighted but I also feel like sobbing? I’m confused, but I know I loved it!

“I don’t know why I hoped that us being married would make any difference when it came to his staring when the fact that his own wife standing right next to him never did,” HA! Idk, felt appropriate. Go, Griffin, at any rate.

I’m crying :( They don’t deserve any of the malice, my poor babies! I love how you describe Griffin, with her unapologetic sense of self that still can get shaken when met with judgment for that exact thing. And Valtor who’s had to get used to the scrutiny but still hasn’t grown indifferent to it, now feeling worse to subject Griffin to it, too. And wtf, how would Valtor not deserve the things he has? What difference does it make if he wasn’t born into it - that should make it even more impressive, what the heck, seriously. (Although, obviously, I’m sobbing bc he shouldn’t have needed to strive for those. Luckily he found Griffin.)

”So her opinion had become the only one that mattered. She was the only one who’d truly made a difference in his life turning it into something beautiful that he cherished every day and as such, she was the only one allowed to influence it. It was as much hers as it was his and no one else’s.” I rest my case with heart emojis.

I still get giddy every time you remind me they’re married! Wheeeeeee!

The above pretty much sums this up, really. This was so sssofffffffft while a little angsty - I was basically just crying for varying reasons throughout the entire fic XD I’m truly in awe that this came out of my tiny little prompt, I’m honored. I loved this a lot!
SeaEmerald chapter 1 . 4/21
This was so sweet :) I absolutely loved reading it, and I thought you did a great job! :)