| Reviews for The Weapon |
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   Cwhit930 chapter 1 . 7/26 Good story. Like the flow and a badass Harry. Haven’t seen ninja Harry before. Thanks for the share |
| Love2read23 chapter 1 . 7/12 Yes! This is awesome. I'm glad Harry had Susan's support. The beginning which stated Harry was being trained as a weapon made me a but weary and had me thinking that the Ministry had Harry trained as an assassin from childhood but being taken in by a sensei is so awesome. Who didn't dream of being the karate kid as a child?! I'd hoped there'd be something in Gringotts that could Sirius free especially with Director of the DMLE being right there but with Pettigrew's body it should be possible to get him a trial. I loved how logical Harry was about being prepared for the third task and for reasoning with Cedric to stay even if having Cedric there as a distraction worked out so well. I love logical Harry. Thank you for writing. |
| VashonBeader chapter 1 . 7/3 I like it! Ninja Harry! Good job! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
| bigfan22 chapter 1 . 6/11 Awesome story. I kind of wish we got to see everyone's reaction to the end of Voldemort, but even without that I def enjoyed a more combat-ready version of Harry Potter. Great job and thanks for writing! |
| Matt chapter 1 . 5/29 What is a hooded scowl? I tried to look ir up online but could not find anything. A scowl is a facial expression. There's a cowl, but it's the same thing as a hood, so a hooded cowl would be redundant. I don't get it. |
| ak chapter 1 . 5/11 bonne fic! il reste l'espion! |
| Ann Jinn chapter 1 . 5/6 Good story. Did a nice job incorporating ninja skills with magic. |
| toile grant chapter 1 . 4/29 good |
| christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 4/28 I enjoyed this. |
| Jimbocous chapter 1 . 4/28 Good grins. Thanks. |
| Username max length is 30 chapter 1 . 4/27 I certainly enjoyed reading this story, and there's much I could praise it for. However, I like to criticize more than praise, so here we go. You seem to have read a singular health article on the benefits of meat, and taken that to man that meat is the only thing that a human should ingest. If that isn't what you were going for, then please add in a clarification where they have some asparagus or something with the steak. If you genuinely think that a 100% meat diet is healthy, then you should learn the definition of "Scurvy". Another thing, the "Ninja" thing is pretty out there in this scenario. Why does a martial artist guy in the military pick up Super Secret Ninja Sneaky Stealth Skills, and why is Harry capable of mastery at age 14? Child soldiers are believable due to the vileness of humans, but child ninjas aren't. |
| ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 4/25 Awesome one-shot and I really liked that someone helped Harry to become a great warrior. Thanks for sharing! |
| mooneysfate chapter 1 . 4/25 great story! :) |
| Speedsters and Arrows chapter 1 . 4/25 Amazing story. Keep up the great work. |
| sparky40sw chapter 1 . 4/24 quite enjoyable tale thanks for sharing it - I am looking forward to reading your stories. |
