Reviews for LORD
Blazeemperor chapter 7 . 7/21
update soon please
6258489 chapter 6 . 7/18
come on really? with his eyes closed? who cares if he can actually do it no way would anyone think she was serious. and just a question, isn't the person who is challenged supposed to set terms? the blindfold should not be required either. she said with his eyes closed, not with his eyes covered, nor while he was not able to see... also, Luis cheated, therefore he lost... then Harry wasted all that time, then Luis tries to either maim or kill them
silver.blast96 chapter 3 . 7/17
Total garbage
Thomas31196 chapter 7 . 7/6
I love this story as it is pease continue it don’t stop this please.
FicTIuNFaN chapter 7 . 6/30
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Greengob65 chapter 7 . 6/26
My first reaction upon reading the description was ‘oh somebody’s knocking off Deprived.’ Then my second thought was well they might actually finish the thing! Seriously of all the stories that I’ve read and got to the end and found it abandoned, Deprived was the one I was most upset about. Thank you for doing this, I look forward to future chapters!
korlinki chapter 6 . 6/24
it's very bad written, idea for story is decent but when you read few decent and one good story you can't even look at this inconsistent shit and 0 interesting character 0 personality 0 fun from reading.
elreyshadow94 chapter 7 . 6/24
daaamn this story is great keep up the good work
ClassHole chapter 7 . 6/21
I'm a big fan of Deprived by Crimson Lord, so I figured I would give what you have here a quick skim and maybe give it a shot. From what I can see it's a really shitty, piss poor copycat of that story. Only original ideas are the worst parts.

This is like finger painting over a Rembrandt.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/21
Chapter 5: Was confusing. Many mistakes were made when it came to names.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/18
Finally story is moving forward
Guest chapter 7 . 6/18
Great job with harry dealing with his past and lily’s emotions. You really nailed it. So is akino her real name or is she nymphadora tonks? With the purple hair? Also does adrian regret what happened with harry or has he not really changed from the brat he was as a kid? All i know is locus is gonna get in a “hairy situation” (get it harry... hehe)
Kairan1979 chapter 7 . 6/20
Thanks for the new chapter.
I hope Harry;s name won't be spat by the Goblet.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/18
Fleur gave Claire a glare while sitting in a chair:) nice unintentional rhyming:)
Arios chapter 7 . 6/18
Cuales son las chicas para el Harem de Harry aparte de Fleur y Daphne
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