really hope ned doesn't go to kings landing now. cant stand it when one of my fav families r brutally killed and torn apart.

My god! This story is fantastic! I love your writing style and Lelia is a wonderful OC. I love the way she interacts with characters and I can't wait to see where you go with her and the plot. You are awesome!

This fic is bloody brilliant.
I love it and I literally can't wait to read more.
Please post more soon

Really love this. I'm actually pretty happy that she showed how smart she was from the start. In most fics I read where there is a person from the modern world transported into TWoIAF they decide to act like normal babies and be dumb so that they don't draw 2 much attention to themselves so this is a welcome change. I love her and Robb's interactions. I would love it if at the wedding the Greatjon says something about how he won't take orders from a southern lady or something like that and then she says something that really pisses him off and then the interaction between Robb and GJ in the show happens and she sicks Grey Wind on him. I would love to see her interact with more of the Stark family. I'd like to see her interact with Sansa, Jeyne and Beth and see her defend Arya from them.

I really like it! Can’t wait for more

I truly love this

pls update. amazing story btw.

woww i really like your story...its so unique and made me really happy resding...pls continue ill cant wait for more

You have a really interesting and thoughtfully written story here. I’m really happy I decided to read this- please update soon!

It makes perfect sense for Cersei to love Lelia more then Joffrey and to encourage her daughter's sword training.

Cersei views her children as extensions of herself, mirror images. So Lelia being a girl makes her look even more like Cersei and she would love the child who best mirrors her or at least the way she sees herself. More then that Lelia is a girl more inteligent then others and wishes to gain power in a world rulled by men just like how Cersei views herself.
Cersei was denied martial training and other privilagrs of men and she wouldn't want to deny her daughter for this is the same as denying herself.

Too Mary Sue. Way too much

Cersei drank more after Robert’s death and Jaime’s departure. Before she drank as much as the other. I don’t understand why people need to write her as a drunk. All this ‘she is more beautiful than her mother’ is annoying and AGAIN for the 1000 times Robert only loves his OC daughter... nothing changes

This was a fun find! Thanks for writing it, I hope to see some continuation soon!

super, can't wait for next chapter! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I really like how, so far, you're pushing canon aside. Too many authors write great AU's but still stick to the canon flush points aka Ned dies, Roose betrayal when in fact everything is going Starks way etc

Littlefinger & Varys wanted a war. Their going to get one.
I'm just hoping you're more inventive than Ned getting beheaded again. Because at this stage Stark aligns with the Lannisters which would be hella interesting.