Surprisingly I'm enjoying it !

Enjoyed this chapter Sam worrying about Ramond and the guys using ear buds that is new looking forward to reading more thank you.

You posted the wrong chapter.

I love this so far! I'm going to have to go back and read the other fic mentioned, but your writing style is very professional and amazing. Well done!

The story is moving along really well I like the banter between Dean and Layla Sam wanting to put them in the trunk as always looking forward to more.

Setting this up nicely Dean going into the bar pretending he still has the mark of cain with Lyra should be interesting thanks for another chapter take care.

Great chapter!

Wow a lot of action in this chapter and it looks like more to come liked how Dean gave the cash in the wallet to Sarge cannot wait for more thanks

This is one of the best tics I've read in a while. Very nice characterize of Sam and Dean. I especially liked hitwitch! Such a Dean thing to say. Three really good PCs (I love Ivy). Only quibble, Dean in the show has walked into shops and bought items with more cash than $200. Just saying. Might change that number to $500 or more. Looking forward to the next chapter

This is getting more interesting. Hope to read more soon!

Liked the Hitwitch reference will Dean suffer more from what happened with the pins in his throat and if and what he might of taken

Enjoyed this chapter poor Dean looking forward to more

"Hitwitch." xD
Yes, Dean is such a dork!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Dean and Sam going to the homeless camp to talk to people with Ramon and talking to Sarge who grilled them on what they were up to. Interesting the talk between Shirani and Dean looking forward to more.