Reviews for White Birds
TrimusicaDrag00n90 chapter 1 . 10/17
this is great
NamelessSaint chapter 1 . 7/8
One historical mistake. Monarchs don't usually leave their kingdoms, not for anything. This is why they have ambassadors, generals, knights, and others to do these tasks.
Guest chapter 21 . 7/2
Enjoyed part 1. Very nicely done.
Just one quibble re the suggestion that Elsa consider seeking a King in chapter 1; Since Kings outrank Queens, Elsa’s future husband would more likely be considered Prince consort. Otherwise it would seem like she had handed over control of Arendelle to her husband! Not her style methinks! That said, it’s your story, so you do what you like! Cheers!
laxwriter chapter 21 . 7/1
Loved part 1 and can't wait to see where u take part 2. Interested in the meaning of Elsa's dream
Nova42 chapter 2 . 6/8
Great chapter, I can feel Elsa's worry for her sister and anxiety waiting for her to come home. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Also now I want chocolate. :P
Nova42 chapter 1 . 5/28
I really enjoyed this chapter, at first I was worried about reading through a council meeting (they aren't always the most interesting thing) but you wrote it very well and in a way that kept me engaged throughout the scene. I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take this story.