Nice story! You’ve got a follow.

i would love if the kingdoms learns the SW FTL, expand through space and become a little empire (like the Chiss)

Holy spittle! This was AMAZING! I look forward to what’ll happen next! I assume that "splitting headache" that the Clone got there, was the activation of Order 66? Yet, they were able to fight it off due to the low signal range from Remnant all the way back to Coruscant? Hm! I’m guessing if they survive the crash, what’ll happened to them after? Go to Atlas? Even if they do or not, Remnant is now their home either way. Plus, speaking of Atlas, I’d also assume that some people (like Ironwood and/or Watts) would LOVE to see how such advanced cloning is even possible.

Oh and let’s not forget Grievous who has been found by Ruby of all people, and his future droid army that awaits his orders...

Excellent!

Ooh! I like the way that this is heading!

And suddenly I feel bad for every villain in the rwbyverse that gets on the generals bad side

This update made my night! I can't wait to see the interaction between Grievous and the family! Definitely keeping my eyes peeled for the next update! Keep up the awesome work!

I think you are trying to mix up quite a lot and things are going out of your hands and over your head...

"Simply" introducing one single chaaracter like Grieveous would whange the plot and the world tremendously... his way of thinking and acting would ensure that his technologically advanced body, meaning he would be on the top search list of Atlas and Salem...

Now you want to change dust critsal powering everything... that's a hard case as well, one of the only reason Remnant don't have out of atmosphere flight is because the dust stuff fon't work when leaving orbit and it's a HUGE part of the lore.

Only introducing 1 character would F up the plot but in controlable way, allowing you to weave and create a story.

Introducing a new galaxy... think honestly, that's like a first contact with a pre spaceflight technological world... they would litteraly glass the planet from low atmosphere nobody would be able to do a thing... plus you have to introduce the force and the brothers gods in working ways... I can already tell you that, except if you are an incredible author with years of experience, this is going to end poorly...

In some situations more doesn't mean better... try to get the best of the characters you have introduced, think how the would act and react in this very situation, what is their goal and ideal, what do they pursue and how, who would oppose theim or be interested in joining them and why... and boom you have a story. SO far you have too many elements to make a coherent thing you need to cut down a bit.

Please don’t give RWBY characters blasters or Lightsabers and Star Wars characters aura

1. The Grimm massacred the clones
2. What was that huge two-headed Grimm?
3. Let's hope we get some good answers on how Ruby found Grievous

Oh please please god do not let this story die like the others I've been following.

Ah General Grievous. One of my favorite Star Wars villains. I highly recommend watching the 2003 Clone Wars series that has him in it. He's very much like his Legends version: deadly and Jedi fear him!

For this, make him something of an Anti-Hero/Anti-Villain: Someone who fights bad guys but not afraid to kill them.

You beat me at making a fanfic about everyone's favorite asthmatic Jedi killer. Good show.

*Cough, cough*

You know, it would be cool too have someone from the galaxy come to Remnant, not a jedi but a separatist, escaping from the Empire. Someone who actually beleived in the cause, and just like everyone else, see everything being destroyed.
Him discovering Griveous and becoming maybe some sort of follower/buddy as they stay on the planet.
It also could kept him informed of what has happen until that point. Maybe having him hear of what happen in Illum since, you know, used everything for the Death Star.

But thats just an idea, I am sure you have better ones already than this

I luv this