Reviews for The Cost
Jpardo chapter 4 . 7/24
Great story..I’m really enjoying it so far. Can’t wait for the next update
Guest chapter 4 . 7/9
Liked the chapter and the bow concept. Green arrow style arrows are a good fit for Momo even if a compound bow would really help her do the things talked about in this chapter. Practicing with a simple recurve bow is not a bad idea. Actually getting her in better protective gear and just having spots for arrow extraction and small creations sounds with flaps for big things would really work with this. I like the idea of her using special gernades for mid to close range as well. It's something she kind of does already in the manga and larger versions of her special arrow heads could be useful.

If you keep going with this fic and don't have experience with bows check out some YouTube stuff on bow myths vs. facts.
808Joker808 chapter 4 . 7/7
This is very good. Keep it up.
billythekid256 chapter 4 . 6/9
Alright I'm invested can't wait for more
Demontsu chapter 4 . 6/9
Keep up the good work! Loving the New chapter!
Urazz chapter 4 . 6/7
This is actually one of the most creative ways to make Momo's powers effective in combat without draining too much stamina. Kudos to you in that regard. The only way I could see her being more effective is if she increases her stamina, try to be more efficient in creating items so it's not so draining in fat cells/stamina, and carry some high calorie food around to eat as well.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 4 . 6/7
Very smart idea here; yeah, Momo can become the MHA equivalent of Hawkeye or Green Arrow.

Keep the good writing.
Suba boy chapter 4 . 6/7
LOVE the direction is all I'll say. I've always been interested in snipe
Nishi No Kaze chapter 4 . 6/7
I think the bow was a good addition. I think most of the fandom assumed a big cannon wasn’t the most efficient way to fight. I think you making the decision to try something new and go on a certain path is what makes this story so you unique and keeps readers coming.

Can’t wait to read more! Great work.
MrSuperTrololol chapter 4 . 6/7
I think that Momo using a bow makes a lot of sense. That's a great idea, can't wait to see where it goes, keep it up!
DarthGhengis chapter 4 . 6/7
I am very much enjoying this so far. I've had the same thoughts about Momo's fighting style being almost quirkless. Creation has so much potential! Looking forward to all further updates.
lightning-187 chapter 4 . 6/7
This is simply amazing! I never would have thought of having Momo use Bow and Arrows! With her quirk she really can be amazing with it! I really can't wait to see what happens next! Really enjoyed the chapter and interactions! Looking forward to seeing the next one!
GuestUser12345678 chapter 4 . 6/7
Yo! Great Story! Also, don't think your the only one who gets a little antsy when it comes down to committing to a path. LOL It happens and there's not much you can do, except realizing that in the end it's your story and you can do whatever you want with it :) Can't wait to see where you take this! Keep it up!
rikanavarro92 chapter 4 . 6/7
this is perfect please dont quit
Renegade1925 chapter 4 . 6/7
You shouldn't feel scared about your idea on how to progress Momo as a character. Her Quirk by definition gives her almost limitless possibilities and her greatest strength will always be versatility. Your idea of turning her into the next Hawkeye/Green Arrow is just as genius of an idea as other authors have done. That's the beauty of her character, no-one thinks of the same thing. This is the first time I've seen someone go down this path for her and you should embrace it wholeheartedly. I for one am ecstatic and can't wait to see how this will also affect Izuku as a character as well. Keep up the great work!
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