| Reviews for The New Black Knight |
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   Andres2hgr chapter 8 . 8/29 Muy bueno el capitulo |
| Siegnir chapter 8 . 8/25 it was a great chapter, i loved the fight between the wyvern and jaune, the blakc armor reminds me of the berserk armor, if that's where it's referenced from that's great, and finally someone doesn't let ozpin order him around and can make his own decision, can't wait for the next chapter |
| hirshja chapter 8 . 8/24 I really like this chapter. I do however think it would’ve been a little better if Jaune had said something to the others basically telling them how to take him down if he loses control. |
| 0akarigan0 chapter 8 . 8/23 Fue increíble Espectacular Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas t. |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 8 . 8/23 You say it’s not your best work but it was still a great chapter to read and it shows that even Jaune loses control over his curse that his friends can bring him back. Excellent update thank you. |
| 0akarigan0 chapter 7 . 8/2 Siiiiii, esto es bueno, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias. |
| 2010si chapter 7 . 7/22 Thanks for the new chapter |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 7 . 7/22 Awesome job with Jaune saving Amber but now he needs to fight Grimm in the city...anyone got an aura booster on hand? |
| NinjaFang1331 chapter 6 . 6/5 Excellent story and great fights and pep talk |
| 0akarigan0 chapter 6 . 5/15 Fue increíble, espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias. |
| tylerbraden13 chapter 6 . 5/15 loving this cant wait for more |
| Kronoslord oftime chapter 6 . 5/15 had promise but has gone down in quality |
| hirshja chapter 6 . 5/13 In terms of grammar, you have a few mistakes the keep on cropping up. 1. You use he/his/him and she/hers/her incorrectly quite often. Sometimes you use the wrong tense (he where it should be him) and sometimes you use the wrong sex (he where it should be she) There were a few more, but thats the mistake that sticks out to me the most, and I think working on one issue at a time may help. |
| hirshja chapter 6 . 5/13 I’m honestly confused. If I was powerful enough to hurt a lot of people if my power began to control me, I would make sure that someone who I trusted to stop me knew what they were dealing with. I suspect that Jaune would desire the same thing, based on how terrified he is about hurting Pyrrha here. Thus, the fact that he didn’t come out and tell Ozpin seems incredibly odd to me. |
| Siegnir chapter 6 . 5/12 great chapter, i like the way this story is going, also loved the way they interact with each other its feels like jaune was always a part of their group, keep up the good work |
