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One of your best chapters yet. Descriptions: on-point. Din's irritation making him want to shoot everything and anything because That Is The Way: hilariously accurate. The conversation about the Jedi Temple and the Child's species: suspenseful and perfectly aligned with Star War lore as far as I'm informed. XD

I love this and can't wait for another chapter. ;D

Also, it took me way too long (like, until this chapter long) to remember the Mandalorians' and Jedis' history. Whoops.

Ok, I'm done fangirling for now. Thanks for the next chapter, and please never give up on writing in any form-you're great at it! :D

Oooohhhhh...the plot ThIcKeNs! Even though this is a relatively short chapter (as in, I will always want it to be LONGER XD), I remain very impressed with the way you weave plot, characterization, and world-building together. One of the hardest things I've run into in writing myself is finding that balance between giving the reader bits and pieces of the plot and characters (the meat of the story, if you will) in between descriptions or fluff or whatever. You do a really good job in giving us personal details for Korr and building up the situation she finds herself in. I liked the part where the Child helps Mando out, too, because I was honestly expecting a fight. The way you had things play out builds tension much better and opens up the door for some interesting developments later, now that Korr is aware of the Child's abilities.

I'm curious to see what you're going to end up doing both with the plot as they near the Jedi Temple and as they explore Coruacant, and I'm also excited to see how Korr and Mando's relationship changes as they learn more about each other.

Excellent chapter, as per the usual, and I'm looking forward to more (sooner rather than later, eh? XD)

Thanks for posting!

Is this a romance between the Mandalorian/Korr ?

Aww yeah! Another chapter so soon...whoop, whoop! This fic seriously deserves more attention. Once again, your writing was smooth and true to character, detailed and yet leaving just enough up to the imagination. You wrote the action-packed fight scene incredibly well, too, which I know is no easy task. Awesome job...I'm looking forward to more!

Really good! :D

Please please PLEASE finish this. It's really good. I'm interested to see how Korr and Mando are going to get on as things progress, and you write all of the characters really well. I love seeing Mando and the child's interactions, and everything from their movements to the dialogue is on-point. Again...please finish this, and I will be here when you do! :D

Ooh...I just realized this seems to be the sequel to your other story, which I enjoyed a while back. Even better! I'm still very impressed and excited.

I've only read one chapter so far, but I really liked it! Your writing is very clean and descriptive without being flowery, and I'm intrigued by Korr. I can't wait to see what's coming next...thank you for sharing!

Wow cant wait for the next chapters :D

Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Oh no-Winta is gone! This is not good at all!

It's interesting to see Sorgan through Korr's eyes-but I don't like that she's making connections to Yoda about the baby...

Great chapter!

Korr is such an interesting character-it will be interesting to see in which direction she develops-and which events bring it about!

I've never really thought about how Karga developed his plan-but to meet with Gideon does make sense-and this is very true-to-character-to walk that line between rejecting the ideals of the Empire, not yet completely rejecting Gideon's offer if there's something in it for him.

Even if Mando were to explain the situation that had Owen killed, she would still want to kill him and feel content afterwards... for about five minutes.

I'm looking forward for more chapters :D