Reviews for Knights of the Otherworld
OneLongDream chapter 36 . 26m
Doing great. Look up Kamen Rider Saber, it just screams EAH crossover.
Guest chapter 36 . 22h
Update please.
Totino Digiorno chapter 26 . 7/31
"A shotgun wedding with angry royal parents." Mr. Paladin, are you trying to imply that Rapunzel wouldn't take almost any excuse she could to make Gabe her son-in-law as soon as possible?
Totino Digiorno chapter 24 . 7/30
"Okay, that's just a big no. I'm gonna shoot you a few times in the junk now." That one line just skyrocketed Tristan into my list of favorite characters in this story.
Totino Digiorno chapter 23 . 7/30
Given how Deacon feels about how difficult it is for someone like him to ask a girl out, and how Mr. Badwolf would relate to that; why do I get the feeling that the aforementioned father might be slightly less hard on our new rider/knight? Regardless, if Deacon ends up getting Mr. Badwolf's approval before Max, it's likely that Ramona and Max will be yelling in their heads "OH, COME ON!".
Totino Digiorno chapter 21 . 7/29
I can only wonder how some of the Knights of the Round would interact with their "Fate" series counterparts? I assume Arthur would be surprised to see that there's a female version of his grandfather (Saber or Lancer). Lance might easily figure out where he got his casanova personality upon spending time with Saber Lancelot. Tristan might get annoyed by, well; Tristan's commentary of how tragic a given situation was. Max might be more confused than surprised about having a genderflipped grandparent (and that's without even tackling the fact that that Mordred is a clone of Altria). I'm not sure about how Gawain and, well; Gawain would interact. Though I think Ben and Bedivere would get along just fine. And while we don't have much of an idea of what Fate's Galahad is really like, it would be fun to see Gabe and Mash interacting with each other.

On another note, it seems that Ryuki's big bad Shiro Kanzaki might become a factor later on.
DJ Toku chapter 36 . 7/28
I love this story & I can not help but laugh at how in hindsight how you mixed the knight based riders with fairy tales & a scant two or so months later Toei decides to make that the very idea the base for there next rider show. Life truly is stranger than fiction & inserted that ironically apropos.
Totino Digiorno chapter 19 . 7/26
So, Gwen's actual first name is Gwyneth? I'm not sure why, but until now; I thought it was going to be Gwendolyn.
starofjustice chapter 2 . 7/22
Another chapter, and we meet another OC and his LI, in this case the other princess from Snow White. There was a real effort to show her as popular and pretty, but also having some things she’s really good that you wouldn’t expect. Pretty consistent from what I saw of her in the show. Also including all the magic puns from the show was really cute. That did help connect what you’re writing to the original some.

I will say there’s all this space in the middle where nobody thinks they should watch Apple for when the monster comes back for revenge even though they know that’s gonna happen. Would’ve personally cut out a lot of that out to have it happen sooner, that way it wouldn’t make the knights look dumb/lazy for hanging around when they’re expecting a monster to attack somebody specific. / Especially an MC’s love interest.

Also the thing about the Knights of the Round Table disappearing from Ever After is confusing, since their stories do clearly exist (and I promise I’m being a smartass talking about the real world).

Other than those things this was a pretty okay chapter altogether. The thing about using basketball skills to anticipate the monster was brilliant. That’s exactly the kind of use a random skill would get saving the day in a real toku episode.

I thought it was both cool and unexpected when you replaced the Rideshooters with fairy tale stallions for the knights to the ride. Wonder if there’ll be any other thematic changes.
starofjustice chapter 1 . 7/19
This is the weirdest idea for a toku crossover I ever heard of.

Reading up about all the people in the fairy tale universe to be able to keep up was surprisingly entertaining tho. And this was a pretty decent first chapter overall. Will have to get to the next one soon.

If I could point out one thing, it's when it describes the reporter girl as looking like Alice in Wonderland. That was really confusing since this is a world where fairy tale characters exist, so I kind of expected it to be Alice, but then it turned out to be Goldilocks' daughter instead. Just maybe be aware of something like that going forward.
IrishKatana chapter 36 . 7/16
I’ve got a question will the Knights meet any of the other Kamen Riders (from the other series) or maybe there Kamen Rider Ryuki counterparts
TrimusicaDrag00n90 chapter 36 . 7/15
this is a wonderful chapter
Mint Reader chapter 36 . 7/15
I feel there is going to be a moment in the story Vivi is going to maybe pull a Woz IF Raven ever became a Rider her self.
alwynonlinereading chapter 36 . 7/15
Yeah something to keep their mind off the Great Rider War and something to lift their spirits
aemorrison7613 chapter 36 . 7/15
Always nice to take a breather after such heavy events go down. Certainly glad the party wasn’t spoiled by any unwanted guests or party crashing monsters.
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